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Bedtime Stories
(#) patdfan 2011-06-25
yesh this is getting very hard to read!!! lol i cried so hard when i read this.. i feel like a loser but i guess thats good that your writing can do that and it is embaressing to cry infront of people i feel like at my grandpas funral u refused to cry and his side of his family (he is my moms step dad) thought i ws heartless i just wantd to go up to them and me like "i can garentee you that i will not stop cring for weeks but no one will see it" i feel so weak when i cry i dislike it...Bedtime Stories
(#) PartyPoison 2011-06-26
You are going to have (five, add three... damn maths...) Nine! You will be writing nine stories in total... and I am going to read them all. =)
I knew it! I knew you were going to kill someone and yet it was still upsetting!
And I bet that in the next chapter someone else dies. Maybe Brendon commits suicide because he doesn't have Ryan, or maybe Spencer dies because from something. Oh, that would suck because then both Jon and Brendon would be alone... you wouldn't be that heartless, would you? Guess we'll find out in the next two chapters. Can't wait!
Yes, I think it added to the story nicely to have that part in. Job well done =)Bedtime Stories
(#) FrankieXIero 2011-06-26
Haha, there I go making and idiot of myself. You will actually have eight stories, not nine.
I need to start actually paying attention to what I am writing.Bedtime Stories
(#) PartyPoison 2011-06-26
Oh, and look at that.
There I go using my acquaintances account. Oh my, I need to just shut up now...
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