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2 reviewsThe story of Bullet Bedlam and her fight against BL industries. When she meets the Killjoys will her life get better or get her in even bigger trouble. My first fic enjoy
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The True Lives Of The Fabulous Killjoys: The Rebellion ;chapter one
(#) RyanCyanideKiller 2011-07-14
MOTIVATION< ENGAGE!!! :D
Anywhoo, I liked it :)
-RyanThe True Lives Of The Fabulous Killjoys: The Rebellion ;chapter one
(#) LoveLiesBroken 2011-09-01
Overall, you've got a good concept and good potential at writing. However, I would suggest proof-reading your work, or getting a beta to do so for you. The story was severely lacking punctuation.
Sorry for awakening the Grammar Nazi Supreme on you xD I enjoyed it overall. Keep writing!
--The Flaming Unicorn of JusticeAuthor's response
thank you!! punctuation... my only vice! I will try to improve it, I have always had trouble with it :)
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