(#) dropthedaggerlaura 2011-07-26Hey yes I love it very much, however I would like to speak freely. Well I was 14 very much like Lauren in the story, and my loving parents died suddenly in a car crash. I was devestated beyond words. I would like to say even if Gerard Way wanted to be my father right away,Its impossible to give up on your parents that quickly. When my delightful parents left so quickly I spent months before I could even walk again. I don't know if you've dealt with this also, but I would like to point out that it's harder on teenage girls than just bam parents die, can't wait to get adopted. I'm sorry if I sound rude, but it is my parents death anneversery and I am blinking back tears so forgive my grammer/spelling mistakes... I'm sorry for this...
Author's responseLet me start by saying this: I am very sorry. This was one of the first stories I wrote so it's.... Well you know what I mean, not all emotions are accurate. I had a point to this story when I wrote it, and it's that she tries to be strong for everyone else. I can understand that you may not like this story due to the touchy subject, but let me make this clear: There is no need to be sorry for saying what you have said. I understand, and even though you don't know me, I'm here for you, okay? I'm sorry that my measly story has provoked you to say this, and I am saying this one more time: I did not grasp this concept and what it would make people think when I wrote it back in May. Stay strong.
(#) dropthedaggerlaura 2011-07-27I'm dreadfully sorry Miss, I was very emotional at the time. You see, my parents were out buying me presents for my birthday when they were taken from me... That is the guilt that haunts me to this day, And yes i've heard all my fucking theripists say "of course it's not your fault". And the worst absolute moment in my life was when I was chatting about my birthday party details with my best friend when I got another call... The funeral was on my birthday. I'm sorry but on a brighter note I'd like to offer a piece of advice... I have written multiple books about death, and for some of the abuse scenes I have talked and question actual abuse victims, for I have never been abused myself. That way I can more accuratly describe the horror. I suggest you might do the same? Thank you for being so gracious towards me, and I appriaciate your work and kind words...
Oh and haha my manager says I'm not supposed to be on here so shhh! Ugh he's not fun at all.
Author's responseOh dear.... Well thanks for the advice, and no problem.
He doesn't sound fun. Ha.
(#) dropthedaggerlaura 2011-08-04Yeah sorry I know I'm ranting to you and I should really (haha) really (hahaha) REALLY stop saying stuff here because I'm not even reviewing... Its been a pleasure speaking with you and even though I don't know you well I find myself adding you as a charecter in my new book... Hmmm... Umm your awesomely cool dood? Is that what Americans say nowadays?
Author's responseHahaha It doesn't matter! AND ONCE AGAIN, REALLY?! That's freaking awesome! And not really, try: You're freaking awesome dude. :)
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