- Yeeowch. To say this story is getting more tense by the chapter would be a gross understatement. This is awesomely dramatic material.... to say the least. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to more of this story as it comes. Keep up the tremendous work.
- Whoa...now I know why you rated this R. That was intense...and bloody. A bit quick, but an excellent intro to Krypto and his friends. I do have to say that these "blood pox" are sounding pretty gorey. Are they an important centerpiece to the story, or just something you added in for effect?
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