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• Prisoner of Hogwarts

  (#) Penseln 2011-08-26

  To start with i didnt expect much from this story. Title seemed a bit like something someone young would have thought up to give there Harry a reason to beat people up and be ''cool''. I'm glad to be pleasantly surprised. Writing was very good and encouraged me to keep reading.
  
  Tonks has always been my favorite character and i think you added her in a very good way in to the story and i hope to see more from her.
  
  What happened to Hermione does sound believable if Harry wasnt around in the first year. Its going to be interesting to see what will happen now that he arrived at Hogwarts.
  
  So very well done so far and i hope to see some more in the future.

• Prisoner of Hogwarts

  (#) DarkestShadow22 2011-08-29

  Why did you cut the whole of the second chapter from ff.net. I read them both and I must say I prefer this version but then again I always love Tonks for her personality more than her other ability's. Hope to see more of this to come keep up the good work.

• Prisoner of Hogwarts

  (#) Ka-ris 2011-10-25

  okay I saw only two slight problems.
  The first was harry reffering to malfoys goons as 'trolls'. It didnt make sence , given he hadnt encountered such creatures yet.
  The second was regarding the Prefects. Hermone was one, but it appeared that Gryfindoor had 3 from the 5th year. (one of the twins as well as ron)
  Other than that a very interesting story
  

• Prisoner of Hogwarts

  (#) slicerness 2011-11-30

  this is hands down my favourite fic of the type (harry comes to hogwarts late due to something in the muggle work keeping him there) and i'm very interested to see where you take this. i hope to see more soon.

• Prisoner of Hogwarts

  (#) DnG 2011-12-14

  Just thought I'd spur you along to another chapter. Just read what you have written so far in its entirety and must say that it is very intriguing. Has definite potential for a very powerful harem story, with Tonks and Hermione as the leads of course. Parvati and Padme are a definite shoe in as well. As for little Gin Gin, well, stalkers are nothing but bad news. I am definitely interested in what Harry will learn in discussion with the portrait, or the hidden chamber behind it. Is it going to be Godric, or Merlin?
  Don't leave Harry ignorant for too long, he's not the type to be manipulated, as far as this story is concerned. Hopefully Malfoy, Weasley and Umbitch will be reined in real quick, can't stand any one of them, and as for Dumbledolt, the sooner Harry learns about what he has done to Harry, the sooner that Harry can cover his back and make his own plans.
  You've shown how observant Harry is, and sees how things can be improved in one prison, what's the difference here?
  

• Prisoner of Hogwarts

  (#) akasanta 2012-01-17

  Enjoying your story so far. Hope you update it soon. Thanks. :D

• Prisoner of Hogwarts

  (#) sleepygirl68 2012-03-08

  I am enjoying this story.
  Looking forward to reading where you will take this.
  Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.

• Prisoner of Hogwarts

  (#) Loewenherz 2012-03-12

  A real gem of fanfiction with the way things are changed and Harry probably will react it does promiss a very entertaining year.
  
  It hurts to see Ginny and Hermione to be changed so much to their worse and Ron's loud mouth getting fully out of control isn't something you'd like to watch every day, but then i guess when Harry will get both the stories about the Troll and the chamber of secrets (I presume this time Dumbledore had to actually do something for his money and reputation?) there will be a lot of hell to pay for poor old Albus... Or rather not, i see the modus operandi of this Harry more in inscening some fights between the toad and the goat and Harry snickering in the background, spending some "quality time" with a woman worth it...
  
  Please continue this story, it's really something else and has so much potential it would be a pity if it would end unfinished!

• Prisoner of Hogwarts

  (#) pfeil 2012-03-24

  Very well done once again.
  
  Harry should tie Hermione up and use her as a body pillow. Once she revived from fainting, it'd be good for her.

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