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Come On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-01
It's fine. Still nothing i'm thinking of having the zombies win but i love vampires too so i might have like a evil vampiress as their leader or something like that so then the zombies don't really win the vampires do :3...if that makes sense. Anyway today Warick Davies came to Spalding to talk about his new book and afterwards he was signing books and i had my wand case with the wand i got from america in it and he signed it!!! and he wrote "Rosie." then "Remember your swish n' flick!" then he wrote "magic!"then his signature and underneath that he wrote "Professor flitwick" HE IS SO COOL!!!!
Rosie :)Author's response
It`s your story and though I don`t really want to die I think it`d be better if they won. It would be more unique as most stories have to good guys win. That sounds pretty cool. I am so fucking jealous of you right now. How was your Halloween? I know I haven’t wrote much over the past few days, been too busy with the Halloween party/sleepover at lizzie`s. I am going to try to update something soon though, like in a few hours. I bought nightmare before Christmas again the other day as my mum “Lost” it. And by that I meant she threw it away. So we watched that at the sleepover we had on Sunday. Hope your okay
Xoxodakota :) ha ha.Come On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-02
My halloween was coo. My friends went round my house after school and we got changed into our costume whilst watching Creep. and i was dressed as a vampire so i had normal clothes on with white powder over my face, with Frank's X makeup over my left eye, and Ashley drew red lip gloss on my face to look like i had been feeding so it was all around my mouth and down my right eye so i looked like a vampire from true blood cause when they cry they cry blood. I was cool cause I got a bit hyper and started running and jumping and skipping down the street. We went to my sisters house and she was so sweet bless her. We said trick or treat and she said "Oh OK!" she went to the door to her living room and shouted "Derdry get the treats quick! before they trick us!" bless her heart! How was yours?
Rosie :) (.......HORRIBLE PERSON!!!!)Author's response
Sounds like you had a great time. Your costume sounds really cool. I was off and so was Lizzie, Steph and Callum so we hung out all day in our costumes. Steph was an angel-the whole white dress and halo goody two shoes kind and I was a fallen angel like from “heaven help us” I had a ripped black dress with tights and actually cut a V into the back of the dress (it was old anyways) and covered the back with fake blood to look like the scars where wings would have been. I drew the line at cutting my back. Lizzie did our make up and she did the x`s for me and steph. And even Callum. Callum complained-you should have seen his face. Lizzie was a vampire and Callum was a zombie. We had a fucking blast we dint go trick or treating but we all stayed at lizzie`s.
I hope you didn’t frighten your sister too much.
xoxodakota I know I`m a horrible person :)Come On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-02
My halloween was coo. My friends went round my house after school and we got changed into our costume whilst watching Creep. and i was dressed as a vampire so i had normal clothes on with white powder over my face, with Frank's X makeup over my left eye, and Ashley drew red lip gloss on my face to look like i had been feeding so it was all around my mouth and down my right eye so i looked like a vampire from true blood cause when they cry they cry blood. I was cool cause I got a bit hyper and started running and jumping and skipping down the street. We went to my sisters house and she was so sweet bless her. We said trick or treat and she said "Oh OK!" she went to the door to her living room and shouted "Derdry get the treats quick! before they trick us!" bless her heart! How was yours?
Rosie :) (.......HORRIBLE PERSON!!!!)Come On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-02
Sorry that posted twice -_- stupid computer ¬_¬
Rosie :)Author's response
Don`t worry `bout it. My laptop is crappy and always messes me up. And the hundred year old computer in the spare room doesn`t even switch on all the time.
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-03
WOW that costume sounds cool! hope you had a cool time. I'm still eating my sweets :3
Rosie :) (...¬_¬)Author's response
Yeah, I thought the costume was prety cool. I had a great time, we all did. Glad you did as well. What sweets ya got, give us some?
This week has actualy gone pretty fast for me, got msot my xmas shopping done and I know prety much everything I`m getting too. I`m glad because I hate suprieses. I ain`t looking forward to it though, I think I told you I had family coming over? And one of the aunts is a huge fake ass bitch. But anyway, hope you have a nice weekeend and shit.
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-07
yeah sorry i was in the middle of writing a big reply at my cousins house but she had to go get rid of it so we could play on sims 3. I'm been Ok i guess. I've now discovered now that i hate fireworks ¬_¬ I'm in the middle of writing the first chapter of ANOTHER story. Yeah i know i'm a bit of a story whore but the idea won't leave me alone it's about the mafia in the late 50s and the plot is similar to the godfather. I'll post soon hopefully but i want to make it the best i can so maybe not. Anyway how are you?
Rosie :)Author's response
It`s fine, happy your okay and not dead or nothing! SIMS?!! I used to love the sims games.
I don`t mind them, I think they`re pretty, but I don`t know if they are worth scaring animals, ya know? My old dog used t proper cower whenever there were fireworks.
Another story?!! I bet it will be cool, it sounds great already.
Eh, I`ve been okay, chrismas shopping, hanging out with friends and listening to music. The usual. I`m suprised you didn`t call me a bitch or something, seeing as I put a :)
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-07
Sorry just tired, depressed and pissed off the usual really. The sims is amazing! My character is a emo/goth with emo hair, red contacts, loads of tattoos, black lipstick, tons of black eyeliner, a hooker top, tight skinny jeans, black boots and she has loads of facial piercings, the traits are cool though she is artistic, childish, evil, genius and i can't remember the other one :3 she's cool :) and when i left i said to my cousin "Look after my character make her a badass!" anyway i don't like them cause when i looked up a bit of ash fell in my eye so i didn't look for a while and after a couple of minutes i thought it would be safe to look so i did and another bit of ash fell in my eye so i didn't look up anymore i just used my dad as a meat shield, and bits of ash kept falling in my hair and i was standing in horse shit so yeah fun! note the sarcasm there Yeah sorry it won't leave me alone here is the begininning if you want it:
Capitolo Uno
Domenica 21st Dicembre 1958
The harsh winter wind smacked my face as I walked, ducking my head slightly to protect myself from the arduous weather. Cigarette dangling from my pale lips, smoke billowing from my slightly parted lips. My hands were shoved deep in the pockets of my dark dress trousers, hiding my head under my dark trilby. Trudging my shoes in the deep snow of Newark’s grimy urban backstreets. When people look into my face, their eyes widen in horror then end up with a bullet in their head. I raised my jade eyes surveying the scene around me, noticing that Frank was looking uneasy. I furrowed my brow and removed the cancer stick from my mouth with my leather-clad hands. Blowing a huge gust of smoke from my pale, chapped lips. I turned to him and muttered in our mother tongue
“Ti sembra a disagio Frank. Che cosa ti preoccupa?” He bowed his head nervously he stopped make sure his eyes were focused on the white blanket at out feet
“Stai morendo.” he stated simply still not looking at me “Ray mi ha detto”
“I’m quite aware of this Frank. That doesn’t answer my question though” I snapped rather coldly. He flinched slightly his hazel orbs flickering up to mine before continuing to stare at the crisp snow, embedded with footprints
“I was wondering…um” he scratched the back of his neck awkwardly “…Who would take over once you’re…you know…”
“Dead?”
“Well yeah” His eyes bore into mine trying to see past the mask I’ve managed to pull over peoples eyes but was met by a brick walk refusing entry to those who I didn’t want access to my inner feelings ands emotions. I broke the eye contact and noticed a group of youths staggering down the alley so I muttered fast and low in Italian
“Ti dirò una volta e una volta solo così ascoltate attentamente” he nodded urging me to continue. “Ho un tumore situato nel mio cervello. I medici dicono che è terminale e ho circa sei mesi sinistra. Ora non voglio uccidere Ray per dirvi quanto vi riguarda e non ha dato a molto lontano e non ha detto a qualcun altro. Ma se vi dico chiunque altro io personalmente ti torure nel modo più vile e brutale che posso nel mio stato.”
“Giuro che non lo dirà un'anima” I nodded. I looked up towards the clouding the sky to see it was filling with dark swirling clouds slowly taking over the whole surface
“We should go” I pointed out “It’ll be dark soon” he nodded in agreement. I placed the cigarette back into my mouth letting the nicotine entrance my senses and started walking back to the mansion.
Yeah it's pretty shit I'm working on it! I'm not finished so yeah you got a sneak peak. Eh i'm too tired to insult people :/
Rosie :)Author's response
I hope you feel a little better soon, Trust me I know how you feel. That character sounds amazing! Ow.. that sounds sore, getting asj in your eye. I used to always go to the display at my town, but I stopped a few years ago cause someone got really hurt and mum didn`t want me there anymore. I didn`t mind cause I never liked it that muhc anway casue of all the screamikgn kids pushing and shoving. Ew, just ew.
I`ve just posted the next chapter of this story and I hvae chapter 22 of heaven help us up as well. That sounds great so far, hope you can write it soon
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-08
Thanks i have to go to my psychiatric on Thursday so i can't self harm for a while cause he'll notice. I KNOW!!!! my character is cool!!!! i finally remembered the other trait and it was rebellious so yeah she got changed into a vampire and snuck into a vampire bar cause i'm a badass ;D Ever since that everything hits my eye which is very annoying i'm surprised that it hasn't fallen out yet :3 Kay i shall read your work IMMEDIATELY!!!!!! thanks for your opinion i'm researching stuff for that and writing it now well i'm meant to be researching for my maths exam which is tomorrow but i can't concentrate properly FicWad was calling me going "Come on Rosie you know you hate maths go talk to Dakota she's way cooler then maths!" stupid short attention span ¬_¬
Rosie :)Author's response
Yeah, your character is so effin` cool. I somehow don`t think your eye will fall out. Well, my mum always says that and she`s a burse so, yeah if it does you could get a eye patch and be like a pirate though, which would be pretty cool. Apart from the whole no eye thing. But you know swings and roundabouts. God my grandparents and dad say that, I feel so old. I hope you like the chapters and I hope you can get the new story up soon/update one of the current ones soon as I love your stories so much. Ick, maths the worst subject ever, even worse than science and P.E at school. I like sports like football and swimming don`t get me wrong, but in my old school all we ever did was rounders or gymnastics. And seeing as I cant balance and can`t really catch because I`m always daydreaming when I was suppose pt be paying attention. I`m cooler than maths?!! Aww, thank you!
I wish you luck at the thing (I can spell the name and I can be bothered opening another window to check how to spell it.) I have to go back to the docs next week for a check up type thing to see how I am on my new pills. I don`t feel any better and it has messed up my sleeping pattern even more and made me feel sick. Stupid antidepressants. I hate them. I hate the doctor guy too, he is all high and mighty and shit, he really gets on my nerves. He made me feel really bad when he saw the state my arms were in. like I was stupid or something. He wants me to go to this self harm help workshop thing, and I already went to something like it two years ago and refused to go ever again because the woman was a bitch who had clearly never suffered depression or any problems in her entire fucking life.
I`m sorry for going on a bit/ranting. I feel so stupid and attention seeking. I am not by the way. I know it is none of my business and feel free to call me a nosy bitch but if you ever needed/wished to talk to me about anything like self harm or anything, you could. I am supposed to be a good listener. I haven`t cut or done anything in nearly three weeks now. I felt terrible for doing it again after I had stopped for nearly half a year, but I just….AAAAARRRRR
Anyway, sorry again. I just had a shitty day and I`m dreading tomorrow. I hope you had a better day/have a nice week.
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-10
I WANT A EYE PATCH NOW!!!!!! I'll make Mon get me one for christmas. Sorry i haven't been on my dad took away my internet connection until my room was clean and bloody hell i didn't know i HAD a desk until i removed all my junk from it! Aw thank you! I'll write as soon as i can i had my maths exam on wednesday it was a lot easier than i expected actually! I just got stuck on pie charts :3 I went to the Phycistrist yesterday and i saw a whore from my school walking out of one of the offices when i got there she just stared at me :3 Him and my parents both think that i'm getting happier but the truth is that i'm just a better liar, i can pretend i'm happier better and i can hide my cuts better. My phycistrist talks really quietly and he mumbles and it doesn't help that i'm going deaf so it's bloody hard to hear him! But one good t5hing had happened my dad finally believes me that i'm bi he said it doesn't make any difference to him but he said that mum would be very disappointed cause she wants grandkids :3 It's fine to rant it's better to rant on a computer rather than keeping it all bottled up and end up punching a wall or stabbing someone :/
Rosie :)Author's response
Yeah an eye patch would look cool. A desk?!!!??? Where????!!! I was forced to clean my room the other day, I kept getting distracted as I found loads of old stuff I forgot about and then stupid Callum and Steph came round. The two of them are glaring at me right now for saying that. Oh, the say hi.
Thanks for understanding about thw whole rant type thing, I always feel like I`m boring people or being attention seeking.
I`m gonna try to update something tomoorow, most likely danger days:the final chapter. So keep a look out? If not though it`ll be the day after as Steph and Callum are staying over. Dad ain`t too chuffed that Callum`s gonna be there. For some reason he don`t trust him anymroe since we started going out. Even though we`re only 14, nearly 15. What does he think I`m gonna do?
Anyways hope you have a nice weekend, and I hope you did okay on yor exam. I`ve been busy all week with history, which has been really interesting. Oh, funny story. My mum got scrathed on her face and know calls herself "scarface" and it jsut made me think of your story
xoxodakota
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