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Come On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-19
IKR!!!! Computers are easy shit! That is disgusting i know but it did actually happen. Well i did do some research on torture techniques when i was writing Secret Agents Unite! so i do have a couple of ideas that i didn't put in there is the Chelsea Smile where you draw a line from the corner of the mouth to the ear like a smile and for added effect they would kick them so they could cry out in pain the the cut would widen. That did actually happen. There are numerous others which i can'r remember from teh top of my head which is pounding. I'm never drinking Relentless again! I had 2 cans of Relentless today and a packet oif skittles and i was super hyper for a while. Skipping down the street and shouting "I LIKE GOATS!!!!!!" for no reason. It was funny but as soon as i got home and sat down to write Empire Builder my head started pounding and my headache is still there and kills, all through strictly as well!!! yes i watch Strictly I think Artem is fit and so is Harry Judd who i vote for most of the time. The story is epic so far!!!! I was going to write a lot today of the Empire Builder but Mon made me go up town with her and she stayed from 10 to 6. So I'm probably going to be writing a lot tomorrow but i do have Taekwondo tomorrow and i don't get back till about half 12 so i don't know also i write a lot of it at school so i'll probably update it at school i don't know :3
Rosie :)Author's response
Yeah they are super easy. That is just gross. Ow, that has to hurt! Sorry about your head, I`ve been in pain all week from stupid stomach cramps and dad has been nagging as I haven’t had th energy to do much of anything. I only actually got dressed a couple of days last week. When I was with my friends but apart from that I just stayed in my pjs. Which is either a harry potter shirt, a Scooby doo one or an old MCR tee. I am that obsessed, yes. God how hyper can 1 person be? I don’t know anyone who watches that show, but if you like it I might start. Mum likes the x factor and Britain’s got talent and tryst yo force me to watch it with her. not nice. I just sit with my headphones in or write or something or text people. Me and steph watched it once to see how shit everyone was. I hope you can update soon, if not don worry. We can ait, just about
Sorry i took a while to reply, I ran out of internet. I have some stupid dongle thing cause the rents did away with the landline so we had to get it.
Hope you had a nice weekend
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-20
My head still hurts ¬_¬ and i feel achy all over so i think i'm ill. So hopefully i'll get a day off school. But then i won't be able to write. I wrote a fair bit Empire Builder yesterday just a bit more than i'm finished that and i'll post it. I'll also try and update on my other stories. Sorry to hear about that. Strictly is amazing! But it's about half way in the competition now. So you would miss all the weird stuff Russel Grant has done. Like last time on Saturday he flew out of a canon! He was amazing but Harry Judd is better :3 My parents hate x factor and Britain's got talent with a fiery passion. He called Britain's got talent, "Britain's got no talent"
Rosie :)Author's response
Hope your head is better today. My dad had a sore head earlier and i kept screaming in his ear to be mean. He deserved it though. I may have to watch it when its on next. He is rihgt about the no talent thing, none of the people have talent and they all sound the exact same-shitty.
I don`t honestly know how my mum can watch it. Then again she likes boyzone and take that type music and she also actually likes katy perry and lady gaga. Ick. And yet sommehow she likes Queen-who are fucking legends as i`m pretty sure you know. She also likes The Cure but she prefers shitty boybands and stuff like celine dion. Anyways I`m off to go read the second chapter of yuor story, just seen its been updated. I¬ll let ya know what I think. I`m sure it amazing
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-21
Eh i had a day off school today so i wrapped up in my bed then i watched Goodfellas again then Romeo and Juliet and i was perving on Leonardo DiCaprio and Claire Danes cause they are both fucking nom! My mum likes Northern Soul and so do i we usually go to northern soul discos if they are any around here. It's just the music I've grown up with/. I was listening to a interview with gee and he said that Frank likes Northern Soul and i was like "FUCK YES!!!!" My dad likes sort of the same stuff as me but he hates Queen :( Why thank you it has taken me several days to write that :/
Rosie :)Author's response
Huh day off eh? ALright for some. I was reading this boring law book all day and typing up my test paper thingy. And dad had control of the tv and my ipod AND phone were dead so I had no music to listen to to help me stay sane. In my old scholl we watched that when we wewre studying shakesphere. Lizzie LOVES him, to be hoenst I don`t really see it.
I`m going to try to update this tommorow, I`m currently watching anime and Callum just came round as he only lives next door cause he said he needed english help. Even though being the goody two shoes nerd he is he knows he`s gonna get an Aon his work. He just wanted to bug me. I`m beinng given a real dirty look right now by the way. The bastard says hey. And now he oiios trowign a strop like a five year old. I worry about him sometimes...anyway I`m gonna review the chapter in a moment, didn`t have a chance ealrier, I had to go get food. I am only human after all...or am I? yeah, I am sadly.
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(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-22
hehehehe i was "ill" i didn't want to go to history cause i had homework due in which i didn't do. Poor you i had no music. but i had my phone and i had my tv. Leonardo DiCaprio is so hot it's not true...but Clarie Danes is hot too. I am going to try and update Empire Builder soon but i'm going to try and update my other stories first. Tell him i say Hai. I saw the review and i replied to it
Rosie :) (:O stealing my smilie bitch!!!!)Author's response
Yeah "ill" I can`t ever get away with fake being ill as my mum is a nurse and my annoying dad knows a lot of first aid shit. So they both always know when I`m faking. Unless I say I have somach cramps dad just leaves it and always treats me nice whenever I say that cause he feels so awkward about it. It was so funny once I had to go get sanitery towls from the shops and I was with him and he went proper red it was so funny. he proper freaked and refused to be near me. I think its a guy thing cause callums the same i threw a pack at his head once and he squeeled like a little girl.
I am probbaly going to get the shit beat out of me now, but I don`t find him that hot, I mean theres worse. I think she`s pretty. My little cousin Lewis who is six used to think Miley Cyrus was pretty and I got scoled for calling her a slut in front of him. i should never have kids, eh? Mum wants me to have four. I am not even kidding you a few days ago I just got home from Callums and she was a little drunk and jsut started the conversation. Most parents tell their 14 year old daughters to never have kids, my mum wants me to ave four. Gross, just gross.
I`m so bored right now, went libary to get sometign to read and I ran into an old primary school friend who is a slut now, I barely recognosed her. And she`s a year younger than me.
I hope you can update something soon, I really want to read the next chapter of likke everything. Im either going to update this tongiht or "As you nightmare comems to life" Any ideas which?
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-22
Yeah that won't work. Once in year one i didn't understand the work so i just told miss i was feeling ill and she felt my head and sent me home!!!! Which i thought was quite funny, my dad still doesn't know i was faking it then which is really funny. My dad has no problem with that kinda stuff he just asked me randomly which one i use and the most worrying thing was my mum replied for me o_O i worry about my family. My friend Hannah said he's fugly so i almost beat the shit out of her but Ashley headbutted me o.O How the hell is Miley Cyrus hot?!?!?!?! she looks like she face planted a brick wall all the time. 4 children?!?!?!!? If i get kids which i highly doubt but hey you never know. I'm going to name one Stormagedon (doctor who) and if it's a girl Frerard (poor kids they'll get the piss taken out of them at school but who gives a shit?) My best friend in primary school is a slut now and she walks past me like i'm not there and she's a midget now which is quite funny. aw thank you! I shall try my best. But remember i am one lazy motherfucker so it might take a while :3. "As your nightmare comes to life" should be updated cause no offense i prefer that one to this story sorry but i do i get really confused when i'm reading this cause i keep thinking about Heaven Helps us :3
Rosie :)Author's response
That is pretty worrying. You treat your friends so nicely, eh? Sorry you got head butted though, ow. I have no idea she does her face is so weird and fake looking and her hair is gross. And she goes around with her boobs half hanging out, way attractive…I don`t think so. get some fucking self respect. It was kinda funny though cause he is only six an kept asking what a slut was and I just sot there awkwardly getting yelled at. Yeah, four! I don`t want kids ever. I`m pretty good with them but I just don`t like them that much. Toddlers ain`t too bad, but newborns are annoying all they do is sleep, puke shit and drink milk. If I ever did have any I dunno what I`d call `em, something unique but not overly mental sounding. They would be given hell if they were called that, but eh. Poor imaginary brats. God, she sounds great. My ex friend is horrible now, she actually came and spoke to me and asked me if I was suicidal or something because of what i was “a creepy emo now” her words, not mine. I just waked of, people like that ain`t worth your time. I know its stupid but I kind of miss her, you know, we had some good times but hey, better without that slut. I refer that one too, but I updated this as it has been ages, I`ll update that tomorrow though
I said hi to callum by the way, he says hi back and told me to say he thinks you’re funny. Kiss ass. I sound like such a caring girlfriend/friend don`t I? don`t answer that
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-22
Yes i do my friends LOVE me. I am their leader and they worship me!!!! I'm joking if i said that to them they'll tell me to fuck off but aw well. Eh that's usual for Ashley. She over a head shorter than me!!! She reaches about my shoulder if she's lucky. I tower over her it's quite funny. Boobs? really? boobs? How old are you? That would be really awkward :3 Oh one of my best friends in primary school still likes she we get along and for fun she calls me a "Freaky emo goth" she said in health and social she's got 200 christmas cards to send!!!! 200!!!!!!! HA I AM AMAZING COMEDY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH -thunder and lightening in the background for evil effect-
Rosie :)Author's response
It sounds like they love you, you all sound so nice, always beating the shit out of each other. Oh well me and steph do that a lot and have the stupidest arguments. We all pick on callum a lot as well, I suppose I shouldn’t, seeing as we`re together and have been friends since we were little, but it is too funny. I am four years old, got a problem with it?!! It was pretty awkward I was just being shouted at for saying that in front of him and he kept bugging me for weeks after cause he wanted to know what it meant. Only two more days to the weekend, this week is seriously dragging by. I went up town earlier with callum and he kept complaining because I apparently took forever looking at the jewellery. Hey I just got my ears re pierced (twice on the lobes) after some little shit ripped them a few years ago and they have only just healed properly so excuse me if I want new earrings. I kicked him really hard in a certain area, lets just say I hope he doesn’t want kids when he`s older… Everyone was there when I got them done and it was funny as Lizzie and Callum HATE needles or anything resembling them. And yet she has tattoos…
I`m going to try and get the next chapter of as your nightmare comes to life, keep an eye out for it/let me know what you think of it?
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) XxxFallenAngelXxxx 2011-11-29
Hey are you alright? We ain`t spoken in a few days, hope I didn`t piss you off or anything? xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-30
Eh :/ Sorry I haven't spoken in ages I feel really bad :/ No you haven't pissed me off. I've just been busy. I had no school today YEAH STRIKE!!!!! I've posted a new story called The Sick, Sick, 6.8 Billion after the song by Letlive. It's based on Torchwood Miracle Day if you haven't watched it then basically people can't die. They can still become sick and can still be injured but they just can't die. It's frerard can you rate and review it for me please? I've also posted auditions which are closed but you can still audition cause you're amazing. I saw about your Grandma and I'm sorry to hear it, my condolences go out to you and your family. My uncle is dieing and it's unlikely he'll see next christmas :/
Rosie :)Author's response
Don`t feel bad, I was just wondering cause I seem to be pissing pretty much everyone off these past few days, apart from lizzie, steph and callum. Lucky you, I had to do coursework. I am so sick of it. Did you hear what Jeremy Clarkson said about the strikers, dad was laughing his head off! I’m gonna go read it in a min, haven’t been on the past day or so as I have been at hospital and hanging out with friends, catching up on real life, that sort of thing. I`ve seen it, I actually quite like it. I was going to audition bout by the time I saw it it was closed. Are you sure you`d let me it? I don`t want to seem pushy or anything.
Thank you for saying that, I`m so sorry to hear about your uncle. I wish you and your family all the best.
We thought that as there was another problem other than the cancer that she may have a bit longer, but dad just came and told me that the results of the tests aren’t looking too good.
Had a huge argument earlier with a friend of my aunts today. She is one of the bitches my aunt knows form the Lourdes holy trip and is a huge bitch. She tried to defend me, but the woman is just awful. She kept saying how I was a stupid, ignorant girl for not believing in god. Then she got on the conversation (somehow, I don’t know how) of how wrong and disgusting gay people are and I nearly hit her. I swore at her which made things worse for me, I just hate her. She said I should go back to Lourdes next year and actually listen to what people are saying and shit. So basically someone who has nothing to do with me, who doesn’t even know me wants me to be brainwashed. and she saw some of my old cuts when my sleeve rolled up and criticised me, called me stupid and an attention seeker. I HATE THAT BITCH!! I don’t know how my aunt puts up with her.
Callum was just laughing his head of when I told him, he`s catholic and hates her and her stupid views as well.
Anyways, hope your okay, I`m going to try and write something tomorrow, but I might not as we have to bath the dog. Ick. Not fun, seeing as he is like the size of a small horse.
XoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-12-01
Yes I heard what he said and me, my parents and my nan were like "He's gone too far" i don't mind him or anything but you don't say that on tv. My dad striked last year but it wasn't a proper strike he just sat at home and said he was on strike :/Of course I'll let you in you're amazing! but I have enough vampires sorry You're not pushy at all it's fine. It might not be for a while cause stories where people have auditioned annoys me after a while even know I have three stories where people auditioned :3 That bitch is such a bastard!!! If I was there I would have hit her! I know loads of people who are bi and are really nice! Myself included ;D On bonfire night I didn't really like it cause you know it was the ash in eye incident. My dad said to me "But Rosie you're burning Catholics!!!" and i was like
"Oh that's alright then!"
Good luck :3
Rosie :)Author's response
I think he did too, he said sorry though. I think. My dad laughed but I told him off a bit for it. He just really wants executions back, he is pretty creepy sometimes. my mum’s a nurse so she can’t really strike and my dad would lose his job if he did. I don` get strike days, sucks right? Thanks, I`ll just leave some info on the audition page then, or on here? Thanks, you’re pretty damn amazing too! :)
She is horrible, a total bitch. I so badly wanted to hit her but I didn’t as I just got ungrounded and I have plan this weekend. She kept going on about wand when I said that there is nothing wrong with it and people who think that there is have something wrong with them, she called me a fucking weirdo. I was just like, how the hell am I weird if I`m a kind, understanding and accepting person. I told her how I had a few friends that were bi and two close family friends are gay and having a civil partnership thing. and she said if I was related to her she wouldn’t let me hang out with them in case I got corrupted or some shit like that.
“oh that`s alright then!” Ha ha. Mums was raised catholic but hates it if that makes any sense., she said there was no way I was gonna be raise one as lots of it is kinda prejudiced and silly. Not all, but some. Like no contraception. So what have a baby a year and slowly kill yourself? And don’t sin and pray for our sinners and stuff? I would rather be a “sinner” and go to hell than be a prejudiced bitch.
At least your eye is better though, eh? I had an eye infection a few months argon and it hurt like hell and the eye drops were icky.
I am soaked through, scamp is evil. He jumped on me right after he got out the bath. I stink of wet dog, not nice.
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-12-02
He did I had to deliver 5 newspapers with the headline "I'm sorry" and a photo of him this morning. Can you put it on the audition page cause that'll solve confusion when I'm using the auditions for the story. I don't know anyone who is catholic but I think if I did they would hate me since I swear like a drunken sailor, i insult the pope all the time, i'm a atheist and I'm bi and I kinda prefer girls to guys. My friend Emma attacked my fringe and since it was over my eye she hit my eye and i was like "FOR FUCKS SAKE ALWAYS THE EYE!!!!"
Lovely :/
Rosie :)Author's response
Oh your poor eye!
I`m sorry I didn`t reply sooner, was at the hospital and not in a very good mood.
I`l put the audition stuff up on the page probably tongiht, thanks again for letting me in.
Yeah, it wern`t nice, at least I was only wearing an old shirt of callums so I didn`t really care...he however did.
Hope your okay and havign a better weekend than me.I`m gonna try to update "dream for the dead" later, keep an eye out?
xoxodakota
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