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Come On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-14
I want one i asked Mon for it for christmas and she might be getting it for me. I just stuff things in my desk and hope my dad doesn't check there. Tell them i say HAI!!!!!!!!!! back and wave like a spaz for me cause i'm that mean ;D Well me and my friends are very weird and perverted and my friend Incas told me that when she sleeps round some time she's going to corrupt me by introducing words to me that i would rather not know about o_O Eh well i guess it's help me write my smut ;) Me, Beth and Emily kept licking each others faces today it was funny what makes it more awkward though is that we're all bi :3 But it was funny and now every time me and Beth hug we both try to lick each others faces and just before Beth went her bus she licked my face and it went from my mouth up to my eye and i think she's dodged up my eye :3 In history i'm preparing for my controlled assessment which starts next week. We're doing about America from 1918 - the new deal in the 30s but the good thing is that we got to do about gangsters that's where i got the idea for "Don't Call Me Scar-face" hehehehehehehehe my story is very influential ;D
Rosie :)Author's response
I hope you do get it. I do the exact same, my desk is full of ancient crap I don`t even remember I have. And I have this massive chest/box type thing under my bed which has the union jack on it only it looks all old fashioned and stuff and its black and grey. I`ll say hi, and wave like an idiot. No one will notice a difference, I always wave like mad whenever I see people I know, even it I only know them a little bit. You all sound completely crazy; all the best people are though. We all always say who wants to be sane or normal. You ain`t very lucky with your eyes are you? First ash in one and now Beth messed up your eye. Good luck on the assessment, at least you learning about something interesting. I finally persuaded steph to let Lizzie cut/dye her hair. She is now grounded and is super pissed at me as it is my fault. (Apparently)She admits it looks amazing though. Her mum hates it.eh well, can’t please everyone. I got a new dress for this annoy xmas party we go to every year at mum`s work. It is the only time I have ever chosen to wear a dress and actually like it. The old woman in the shop kept going on about how maybe I should try a slightly bigger size and how it shouldn’t be worn with the shoes I was wearing. So I flipped her off behind her back and kept picturing strangling her. What she said really bugged me though, not about the shoes but about the size thing. I have recently gained a bit of weight(only a little bit) but I am actually happier now that I have, (and a healthier weight too)I have never been too confident with my looks and actually went through a short period of trying to starve myself so I found what she said really horrible.
Anyways, hope your okay. Just read your one-shot, I`ve gotta go out but I`ll review it when I get back.
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-14
Oh btw I've just posted a one shot which has taken me 3 days to write and I've put quite a lot of effort in it so can you please read and review it? if you don't mind :3
Rosie :)Come On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-14
I wave like a spaz when i see people i know. My best friends though i scream their name and run at them. I get a lot of weird looks but I don't care. No i'm not very lucky with my eyes. What does everything have against my eyes!!!! It's the same bloody eye as well!!!!! I think my fringe acted as a shield. My parents are forcing me to have my hair cut today :'( I'll miss my fringe!!! THAT WOMAN DESERVES TO DIE!!!!!!!!!!!! Never believe a word that old bat says to you. Evan know I've never met you I'm sure you're about as skinny as me...well if your a healthy weight then probably not the same size as me :3 since i'ma size 6-8 mostly 8 though. Anyway just because some blind, naggy witch tells you something then that doesn't mean it's not true! Anyway enough of me moaning about weight I've been trying to persuade loads of people that they're not fat and they keep using me as a target weight. I'm just like "NO! Don't!" I eat like a fucking horse and yet i don't put any weight on. I have that skill but according to my BMI i'm anorexic I don't really think my height helps though since i'm 5'7 nearly 5'8 now and i'm only 14 which was really annoying when the doctors found that out cause they kept asking my dad "Are you sure she's not anorexic!"
"Yes!"
"Are you sure she's not bulimic!"
"Yes!!" Stupid doctors ¬_¬
NEVER starve yourself again! I never have staved myself but I've read books where people have and it makes people really ill and loose friends and it ruins your hair!
Rosie :)Author's response
Me and my friends do exactly the same. Lizzies the worst though, she always hugs people really, really tight. I swear, that girl`s hug are deadly! Your poor eyes, hope it gets better. Have fun getting your hair cut, I used to hate having mine done till Lizzie started doing it for me. I never trusted the hairdressers at salons and stuff, after one of them ruined my aunts hair and my mum`s. poor fringe! I LOVE my fringe, and my hair. My mum keeps nagging me to get it cut so what I do is go to lizzies and just hang out there and say she cut it. Yeah she was a right old bag! I am actually happier with the weight I am now and I actually feel healthier and I actually am. Steph eats everything and doesn`t put anything on.
Doctors are stupid, really stupid. Thanks, sorry they keep thinking that about you.
I`m thinking of putting up some auditions later for yet another new story. Interested?
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-15
Mon's friend Kim came round mine on Saturday and she hugged me really tightly and lifted me up. I thinks he broke my rib :3 my hair has been cut now the fringe is cut just above my eye. And i have more layers put in and it is quite big at the top and straight at the ends. I love my hairdresser she's amazing and her husband likes Nirvana. I would never trust my friends to cut my hair. It's only cause I've known mon for such a long time that I've let her dye my hair. I see the word auditions i'm in!!!
Rosie :)Author's response
Yikes, you ain`t very lucky are you? First you eyes now your ribs, what next? Your hair sounds really cool . at least you have a decent hairdresser. I LOVE Lizzie doing my hair, she always does it great and we just chill and blast music and talk and stuff so it is pretty fun too. My dad LOVES Nirvana, I got him a shirt for Christmas. And a Scooby doo one cause we used to always watch it together. I still love Scooby doo. I have a stuffed teddy of him in my room. Your character sounds amazing, love the quote “I may be bi but I`m not desperate” I will definitely have to put it in somewhere. Love it.
If I may say so it reminds me of this bitch at school who was giving this kid hell for saying that they were bi and she said “Like what, you like guys and girls so it means you just want to fuck everyone” (I kicked her ass) and I went proper mental and I was laughing so hard cause the girl said she didn`t because she wouldn’t go near her if she was the last person on earth.
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-15
I get beaten up a lot by my friends we're very abusive to each other :3 My dad likes Nirvana that's why did didn't mind when i got a Nirvana t shirt from eBay, For christmas I've got him a coldplay CD which was annoying cause i HATE coldplay ¬_¬ I got my brother a 70s disco black afro wig cause there wasn't any ginger ones left ;D I found one that really big and poofy and it was bubblegum pink and since he's colour blind he wouldn't be able to tell what colour it was. I was going to get it but it cost £18 so my dad made me get him the smaller, black 70s one for £8 cheap bastard -_- Why thank you i do like my character she is amazing. I say "I may be bi but i'm not desperate" a lot now :3 That is a very good quote!
Rosie :)Author's response
Your friends sound just lovely, so kind. I don`t really like them either, I can listen to a few songs but not many. Sounds like nice gifts, I`ve got my xmas shopping pretty much done, just need to my for my mum. Got Lizzie this really cool necklace with a giutiar pick on it and some alcohol. well I gave mum the money for it, seeing as I`m not ole enough. I got Steph another necklace only for adiffernt band and some hello kitty stuff.
I know everything I`m getting but I keep telling everyone I don`t want anything, cause I don`t. My reletives come on the first, I am dreading it. I want to see Chris (ninja cousin), inside joke) but I don`t really wanna see one of my aunts of her bratty 5 year old daughter. Her kid pulls my hair and last time she was over ruined my maths notes and I was banned from playing my "Devil" music while they were around. They are realy religous. My mums family are msotly Catholic but they take it to the extreme. My aunt who lives across the road is super nice. I went to lourdes with her and I HATED it. I found out that I`m a total sinner, cool huh?
Everyone says hi and is waving like mad. Me, Lizzie, Heather, Steph and Callum are all hanging out at my house blasting music cause everyones working. And its like nine at night or somethign but eh, whatever.
hope your okay, I`ll read it in a sec. I`m sure it`s great. I hope yoou update a story soon, I`m going out of my mind here!
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-16
Also I've posted the prologue for a new fanfic (yes another one) it's called Empire Builder and it's about drugs ;D I'm planning this to be one of my best fics. So I would appreciate it if you could read, rate and review it so i know if you like it and if it's worth continuing since no one has reviewed yet :/
Rosie :)Come On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-16
I had to listen to dad's coldplay CD on the way back from Devon and that drive took 7 hours!!!! It was torture. I still need to get some presents. All my friends want are skittles which are easy and cheap enough to get. I want to get you a pressie now. What do you want for christmas and tell me your address so i can post it even though i sound liker a stalker asking for your address :3 Punch that brat in the face for me! Devil music? really? My dad calls it "Argle Argle music" cause he's weird. On my mum's side of the family they are either atheists or agnostics at least that i know of :3 I have 15 second cousins and 35 second cousins once removed. Just on my mum's side ¬_¬ I think my dad just says random names and just says i'm related to them. On Bonfire night when i was at my cousins house we went to this event that the village (where i got ash in my eye) and we were saying "Death to homophobic Catholics!!!!!!!!!" it was funny ^_^
I'm sorry i haven't updated in ages I just haven't been in a writing mood :/
Rosie :)Author's response
I'm sorry i haven't updated in ages I just haven't been in a writing mood :/
god, poor you. I`ve never been Devon, what`s it like? Skittles! Ha, who doesn`t love skittles? I go pretty hyper whenever I eat them, or anything sugary really. I want to punch the brat in the face, but if I do I`ll be in trouble for the rest of my life, maybe longer. Everyone thinks she is like the perfect child, only I know how evil she is. Yeah, they call it that, I`m not even kidding you. Mum and dad don`t really give a damn what I listen to, they just call it noise mostly. I have an unbelievable amount of family too, most I`ve never met as they live in Scotland, Holland or America. That sounds really funny. I understand if you haven’t been in a writing mood, don`t worry about it. I`m gonna try and post the next chapter of this in the next few days or so, I just ain`t too sure if anyone really likes it anymore.,
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-17
Devon is shit all there is are hills, sheep and cattle. My hotel was at the bottom of a hill and there was no signal!!! D: It was horrible. Skittles are amazing!!!! I have a massive family on my mum's side but i don't usually see my dad's side. I see my cousins on my dad's side about once a year. My dad doesn't like his parents and he doesn't heard from his cousins in years. He can't even remember what they're called! I'm writing the first chapter of Empire Builder at the moment but i shall try and update my others if i can
Rosie :)Author's response
OMG!!! (I NEVER say that, never) There was no signal???!! I would probably have died. It sounds like a great place, so fun. Don`t get me wrong I love nature and stuff, but God. Yeah, skittles are great, I havent had any in ages, I might go and buy some tomorow and just scoff them. I think I deserve it, seeing ad I`ve been popping painkillers all day like they are smarties or something. I tell ya, mother nature is a total bitch. Mum was watching children in need rocks manchester thing and I now have a headache. wonder why? could it be because of the shitty music? quite likely. I`m all for charites and always give money to them when I can, out of my own savings, expecially if it is to do with kids, animals or the armed forces like help for heros. But on chldren in need they have all those sad stories to try and guilt trip you, it kinda bugs me. I feel really mean but it does.
Anyway only one more day till the weekend, YAY!!! It`s also Callum`s birthday on sunday so we`ll all be hanging out so if I don`t udate on saturday that will be why. Hope you have a nice weekend
xoxodakota :) just to annoy youCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-18
It was torture. When we wen to Cornwall i was sitting in the back seat waiting for signal and when i did i would scream "YES!!!!" scaring my parents and sister, then i'll be blighted with texts from the night previous. Children in need annoys me not because of the charity but because of pudsey he is really annoying. in ICT we had to do an animation for children in need and in mine pudsey got shot in the head :P At school loads of people came into school in their PJ's i didn't i just wore my harry potter t shirt, leather jacket, black skinnies, and my converse, one girl in my class came as a smurf, it was so cool!!! and she sticks up for me in ICT when someone realizes I'm not doing the work, but just on FicWad. Most of the time she's a bitch though -_- Next non uniform day I'm going to school either dressed as a nun or batman :L
Rosie :) (:O I thought you had stopped but no! you had to be horrible ¬_¬)Author's response
I don`t think I`ll be going there anytime soon then. Yeah, thar yellow bear kinda irritate me. Good for you, you kiled it!! Do you ever work in that lesson? I hated ICT at my old school, we always did boring shit like spreadsheets. i think you should go as batman. Why? cause I said so and he rocks. I have the first chapter of the new story "dream for the dead" up, so check it out? I hope you like it. It isn`t gorey but I`ll try and work on it in the later chapters. Any ideas for how you killed the poor inocent teens would be nice. I`m only askign cause I know how twisted you are
xoxodakotaCome On Angel Don`t You Cry
(#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2011-11-18
I do work in ICT...just not a lot. Batman is amazing!!! I shall check it out now. YAY GORE!!!! Can i kill people by impaling them like Vlad the impaler does, which is just basically shove a gigantic pole of someones arse make sure it doesn't hit any internal organs, until it comes from the mouth and you leave them on there and people can survive days without dying. Yeah i'm very twisted ;D
Rosie :)Author's response
Yeah, who needs ict anyways? It is so boring and I am pretty sure most kids know how to use a freaking computer. That sounds just plain horrible and so very cool. Any other ideas, I could really use your twisted mind. And if I just ask Steph or Lizzie they`ll think I`m even more mental than I already am! I hope you like the story.
xoxodakota
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