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• The Unexpected Hero

  (#) Mr7 2006-07-09

  awesome work, keep it up. you might want to check out Harry Potter and the sisters black, which becomes a harem with narcissa, bellatrix and tonks in it... or if you're looking for something more tame I'd recommend white knight, grey queen, by Jeconais, which can be found at www.fanficauthors.net
  keep it up, I hope you update soon.

• The Unexpected Hero

  (#) gellybelly 2006-07-13

  OMG Im sorry after i finished popping the eyes back into my head I can review OMG I LOVE your story so much you better update.

• The Unexpected Hero

  (#) yournombrehere 2006-08-12

  Ok, when I started the tsory, I liked teh concept. But, it has become cliche and there are some inconsistencies and unanswered questions. I thought it totally unrealistic, that they both "felt" a connection and were saying 'I love You' so soon-however, if you're peddling the 'love at first sight' cliche then it can be believeable. I was also confused, was liana (you also referred to her as luciana) and her family supposed to be muggle royalty or some type of magical french royalty? She obviously knew of magic, so is she a witch? Or is she just informed of magic? If she is a witch, wouldn't it be a good idea for Harry to obtain a wand for her?
  Also, after Harry has had years of training, I find it rather amazing that Liana can easily convince him to go shopping. If he knows of the dangers and he truly loves her, he shouldn't have indulged her, he should've convinced her to stay or to just take her to see her family and get more protection asap.

• The Unexpected Hero

  (#) jabarber69 2006-10-16

  Hey this is fucking great, why the hell arent you keeping this updated. from your notes you seem to be first prioty on the elves story, and while I havent read that yet, thinking about it, dont really like lotr crossovers, but to get back to this story it is fucking great has intrigue, myth, legend and mystigue so do us all a favor and update!

• The Unexpected Hero

  (#) jfitzgerald236 2007-01-08

  This story kicks ass. I hope that you will update soon. Thanks.

• The Unexpected Hero

  (#) koppe 2007-01-24

  Good story, though certainly original. Hope you'll update soon.
  I do hope Harry and Luciana can make a go of their relationship, and look forward to Harry meeting her parents (as well as Harry's friends and "parents" meeting her). Maybe they'll end-up married and with kids.
  I also hope Dumbledore and Fudge gets involved -- and perhaps that Harry visits Hogwarts... or perhaps starts working there as DADA-teacher as his cover is somewhat blown.
  Finally, I'd love a prequel about Harry's short time at the Dursleys and at the orphenage, and then about his training. That would also be a great place to introduce the royals and explore the reaction of the Wizarding world to Harry's disapperance and assumed death.
  Please update soon!

• The Unexpected Hero

  (#) fishstix 2007-03-24

  i've read all of your other WIP and this is in my opinion an exalent story. your best to date.

• The Unexpected Hero

  (#) rdgale2000 2008-10-15

  Even though its been about a year since you last updated, please continue this story. It is one of the few Harry / OC's that I seem to like.
  
  There is still a lot about Harry's early life, his 'father' and work that we don't know about.
  
  From one procrastinator to another, please keep the story going.
  
  rdgale

• The Unexpected Hero

  (#) Grozt 2010-01-21

  I would recommend Scion of Gryffindor by Crys. It is one of the best Harry/Tonks out there!!

• The Unexpected Hero

  (#) GoCanadaWBC 2011-02-17

  Your stories rock you just need to update

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