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First of the Gang to Die
(#) Bitch-Bot 2011-08-31
i want to be able to buy this story, in a book from a book store. i thik it would sell really well :)
update soon pleaseFirst of the Gang to Die
(#) AtomicAftermath 2011-08-31
omg that was seriously the cutest thing i have ever read. i love how you worked that quote in at the ending! and when frank started to laugh over gerardo? i burst into laughter as well. very well done, lornaigh was a beautiful writer.First of the Gang to Die
(#) Torogirl15 2011-08-31
OH MY GOD THEY'RE SO CUTE TOGETHER IT MAKES ME WANNA CRY!! Now that I got my little fangirl squee out of the way, I can actually talk intelligently about the chapter. Very nicely done, playin' up the romance! And yes, Americans are good with guns, WMDs and taking people over. Like a boss. And I totally agree with Bitch-Bot, this would be a really good book. Though I think the MCR crew would be kinda weirded out to think of Gee as a gangster. By the way, what's up with all the ghetto slang references that Lornaigh says? I mean, I just reread this story and in the beginning she does a lot of 'what up my niggaz' type references. Not saying you should take it out, cuz it's funny coming from an Irish chick, and not just a regular white person, so I'm not offended. I'm just wondering is she semi-racist against black people, or does she just not know the unspoken rule that no other race is allowed to say the word 'nigger' after slavery and segregation ended. But she's funny as hell, so I'll let it go. Really sweet chapter, BTW.
Yours in Foreverville,
TGAuthor's response
I do not think she has ever said the N word in the story or indeed in real life, and she was certainly not racist to anyone. I'm really, really sorry if you got offended but Lornaigh was never hateful toward any different race, and got very angry at people like that since she came from an area where sectarianism and segregation was so rife and common up until this day.
Sorry if I got a little preachy there,I just wanted you to know :)
-JaneFirst of the Gang to Die
(#) fueledbyPanic 2011-08-31
I LOVED this chapter. And the title - love that song XD and the "for trees" reference, wow. Lornaigh, you are a genius.
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(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-08-31
CAR BIAS IS JUST SO MUCH FUN! :)
-Adnarim SmadaFirst of the Gang to Die
(#) AdnarimSmada 2011-08-31
This should be a book, but it's sad that it would result in an international incident if it were published because you can't slander a person's name. It is just brilliant and indescriable though.
Oh, this thing is definitely the size of a book. My goal is to get all her stuff printed out for myself and my bookshelf in the future. I've only printed out "Full Of Holes", (WITHOUT AUTHOR'S NOTES THOUGH I WILL BE BACK FOR THEM LATER), and it up nearly a half of a huge pack of computer paper.
-Adnarim SmadaFirst of the Gang to Die
(#) Torogirl15 2011-09-01
We're all good there, all good. It's just, amongst us Blackies, for most it's a touchy subject. Personally, I am probably the whitest black person you'd ever meet, but it just made me think about that unspoken rule. Up here in Michigan, people tend to flip out if you say nigga, but since she wasn't American, it's actually pretty fucking hilarious. And yeah, I just keep laughing when I think of her coming over here and people asking her if she knew the queen. Kinda like people saying that all black people know each other/look alike/are related. Wow, this totally just got random.... XD
Yours in Foreverville,
TGFirst of the Gang to Die
(#) xXLaylaxX 2011-11-01
Its even more funnnier now because Frank turned 30 this year. lol
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