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The Past Ain`t through with you
(#) afabulouskilljoy 2011-09-02
awesome! xxAuthor's response
awww...thank you. I`ll update soon
xoxodakotaThe Past Ain`t through with you
(#) TheGiinger 2011-09-02
I love the plot so much and the whole concept, but please remember to just proof read to avoid any little mistakes :)
This is just constructive criticism, okay? Please don't be offended, but your audience isn't stupid, you don't need to explain every little detail. If you just said something like- 'Gerard's jaw dropped in astonishment'- the audience will understand that Frank's behaviour is unusual or out of character, there's no need for a sentence of explanation, okay? Occasionally, yes, but not all the time.
God, I feel like a bitch. Please don't think I don't like your work, I love it, this is just an area to improve in :D
xoAuthor's response
I`m glad you like it, and I am in no way offended or anything and you are NOT being a bitch. (trust me, I know a bitch when I see one) Thanks for letting me know, I`ll work on it.
xoxodakotaThe Past Ain`t through with you
(#) midnight_star22 2011-09-04
This is definitely a unique story! Love it(:
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