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• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) Wolfric 2011-09-10

  I like the chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) DrT 2011-09-10

  Too bad there isn't a rating of 'how sweet' -- good use of Neville, and I must say your version of Dumbledore is pretty unique in his reactions in the last few chapters

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) WHCnelson 2011-09-10

  A good chapter... I liked the action between Harry and Victor; it was done very well... I can't wait for your next chapter...

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) Cateagle 2011-09-11

  Well, that was an interesting "learning experience" for Viktor, methinks he now has lots to think about on a number of subjects. I do like how Neville took over protecting the younger students, I can see them helping bring out his true personality and ability. The banterage at the end was quite enjoyable and amusing; it could lead to some interesting "play" in a few years.
  
  Hermione's musings at the start of the chapter were nicely done and I can appreciate her thoughts. That song does seem rather appropriate for her thoughts about Harry and he does fill the bill, not from desire to put himself forward but simply because he can't simply walk away when things need doing.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) Vanir 2011-09-11

  Lovely interactions between ... well, loads of people..=) I like your Dumbledore. Your take on the victorian equality of the Wizarding world was well executed, and the Diplomacy-by-fist was truly schoolyard perfect. Once the boys slug it out, there's no animosity left. It's Dealt With.
  Keep it up. I wouldn't mind longer chapters, but you do as you please in your personal universe. I'll be here anyway. Thanks.
  

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) Hytekrednek 2011-09-12

  I love the way that you put good ole Victor in his place. This is becoming one of my favorite stories.

• One Wizard Too Many

  (#) LabRat 2012-01-01

  I completely agree with Vanir and Cateagle, though I must admit that having never seen Footloose, I'm a little lost on the reference.
  
  I also understand what you mean about Hagrid and Krum. That's why I wait until I'm in the editing stages (after spelling and grammar check) to mangle the written word with their dialects.

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