(#) xlostsoulx 2011-09-13I love and hate this ending. I love how it's kind of open ended and makes you think a little bit. Of course that makes me hate it too. But it's a good kind of hate.
The implication is that Bert is telling the truth but then it also just be that he’s full of crap and Ray could just be acting like the mature person in the room by not engaging in Bert’s taunting.
Also I really like that this isn't overdone with angst. Now it does have plenty of angst to go around but its not over stewed angst soup for the most part and it easily could have been. This had me staying up a few more minutes than I should have but it was well worth it.
Thank you for not giving up on this fic.
- Wow! This was such a good read! Very nicely done and well written. I like the concept of this; and the ending! I really didn't expect it. I expect I'll be thinking over it for the rest of the evening. I want to know more! It's so frustrating, but I absolutely love it. This was a really good read, thanks! :)
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-01-09I CAN NOT BELIEVE THAT THIS IS THE END! X.x Ray?!?!
I need to know more!
I'm craving more!
It's so open ended.
But I did love this, absolutely loved it... It was so well written and just full of emotion. I loved the cute scene between Frank and Gerard but I craved more there as well.
You wrote it in a way that leaves everyone hanging.
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