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Haley finds out she's being watched but why? And more importantly by who? Rated PG-13 for violence in later chapters.

Category: Fantasy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Fantasy - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2011-09-18 - Updated: 2011-09-18 - 874 words

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(#) Vampirechick1159 2011-09-18

I'maliking it. BUTTTTTTTTTT I can see some places you could have worded it a little differently...not to mention some grammar issues...I should shut up before my criticism becomes less than critical. >.< Post more! :D
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(#) AbandonedHope 2011-11-20

I'm curious as to where this is going to go... Will there be more past this one chapter?
It was a good beginning. I was drawn in... But now I find myself wanting more. I certainly hope this isn't all you're planning on posting. O.o

Mmm, I'm not seeing too much to be critical about honestly. I enjoyed it, especially for a first chapter... Those can be difficult. I guess just with how cool she is with the guys in her room and maybe more descriptions with that instead of just 'pop'... although I guess maybe that's what you were aiming for.

I'll shut up now. It was excellent!
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(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2011-11-20

Lovely. I'd like more.
Will there be more?
It could go anywhere so I'm interested in where you're going to take it. Explanations are always good. (:
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(#) vampiredude1159 2011-11-23

Trust me, I will write more.I'm just kinda of been on a writing hiatus for a while but I'm getting back into it now. So expect a chapter soon!