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Skylines and Turnstiles
4 reviewsIf I summerised... i give away whats in the chapter... and who wants that?
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(#) Vengefulscout 2011-10-09
OMGEE AMAZING!!!!!!
Update soon please?!?!?! Im so excited for more!!!!!!!
Emily :DAuthor's response
Thankyou! Heh yes more soon!The Watchmen
(#) ChloesGreenDay 2011-10-09
This is a fantastic concept, and your writing is good. However, it pains me to say this, but the punctuation is terrible. There are also a few spelling mistakes, though that's not really something to worry about. It's mostly just the punctuation. I would suggest you get a Beta reader for this. :) -CAuthor's response
Thankyou and thats really helpfull, I'm dyslexic so my spelling gramara maths... the list goes in is terrible, so it would proberly be a good Idea to find a beta thankyous! C:The Watchmen
(#) Tierney6661 2011-10-09
This was fucking amazing!! You NEED to update, I love this whole story, and the song fic thing!! I absolutely can't wait for the next based off that Panic! song ^_^ Will Bandit be wearing the pinstripes?Author's response
Dhaha thankyou so much! and she may be ;)The Watchmen
(#) Apocalyto 2011-10-10
Woo-hoo! I saved Bandit!! xDAuthor's response
Hells yeah mother fudger!
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