Leon reveals a new power which could change the way this war is fought. To make matters worse, he's using it on Darius to help him kill James. ULEP seems to have the upper hand as they advance on t...
So Rachel helped you out on that one? She told me this was good, but I didn't think she'd be serious. BTW there are still issues with the story, but you've likely been beating youself with a stick about that (or so Rach told me). Keep it up (not the stick beating but the writing).
Not much I can say here except that this continues to be extremely exciting stuff. Downright impressive feel for all the action and drama. I'm definitely going to be looking forward to more of this story as it comes.
Awww, how sweet, you remembered to give me credit :). I'm still working on the ending part of the next chapter for you. I should have it done soon.
Finally got to a computer. Anyway, very sweet. Bloody beginning indeed. I like it.
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