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Chapter Eight
38 reviewsFire-breathing stepsisters, unhelpful puff heads, and the footsteps of doom...NEW CHAPTER, GUYS! R&R PWEEASE!! xD
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"Be My Detonator."
(#) UndergroundCinnamon 2011-10-18
I LOVED the chapter! It's really great, not to mention fucking hilarious! Eeep...the fever sounds like it was bad...Feel better!
xx, a.
Oh, one more thing: this could just be my warped mind speaking, but Ray isn't the guy Jamie met at the park...right?
xox"Be My Detonator."
(#) Ontheedge 2011-10-18
WHAT'S GOING ON? WHAAAAAAAT?
And I bet Ray's the guy Jamie met at the park! And this was great! Amazing chapter - funny, too. :)"Be My Detonator."
(#) Meganisariot 2011-10-18
Asskglglhlflf! I love this story so much! And this chapter was great (: I love how awkward and accident prone Gerard is. Keep up the amazing work. Update soon if you can?"Be My Detonator."
(#) MCR-BVB-PATD 2011-10-18
You're seriously amazing! I love you and your writing so much, please update soon :)"Be My Detonator."
(#) sushiipodrocks 2011-10-18
I actually love this! Especially the reference to Voldemort... You're an amazing writer :D"Be My Detonator."
(#) RunAwayWithMe 2011-10-18
I think the references in this are hilarious.
I still hate Jamie, I just wish a flock of meese would trample her or something.
I just read that other review, and it can't be Ray, can it?
Wow, that bitch can make anyone join her on the dark side. Yes she should definatly be trampled my meese, then Gerard and Frank can be together.
Anyways, enough of my rambling. This story is amazing and so very funny. You're a great writer. Please update soon."Be My Detonator."
(#) Shiwoggi 2011-10-18
asdfghjkl. I LOVE this story and every time 'meese' or 'moosi' are mentioned, I laugh so hard :D
And Gerard's all awkward and accident-prone and Frank's all chill. Srsly, you're a really good writer. And Ray saying that Jamie "isn't that bad" sounds... suspiscious. Excited for the next chapter now :3"Be My Detonator."
(#) mein_romantik 2011-10-18
This story is so great xD It's hilarious and adorable, and your updates always make me smile!
I hope you feel all well soon!! :]"Be My Detonator."
(#) KilljoyLiv 2011-10-18
AAAAAH AN UPDATE! I love how you constantly refer to Jamie as Voldemort/Satan/Hitler. It's even funnier considering my best friend is called Jaimie."Be My Detonator."
(#) MorganIero 2011-10-18
UPDATE NOWNOWNOWNOWNOWNOWNOWNOW!!!!
I love this so much :D
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