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A reflection into a certain someone's life... (If you don't want it spoiled, don't read the character list)
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What's In A Name
(#) writergurllw 2006-08-03
Great story. I hope to see more from you. I love the way you told things, you seem like a master at first person, (I suck at the point of view)Author's response
Thank you very much! ^_^ I like the first person point of view because it seems very intimate; truth be told, I have the same trouble with third person point of view that you have with first person. ^^;
Again, thank you for reviewing! I'll check up on what you're writing as well!What's In A Name
(#) JesusKetchum31 2006-12-22
What an interesting take on Knuckles' backstory. The way you frame it makes it very... mythological, almost realistic in the sense that myths can be. I thought the voice was a bit odd, though, and there are a few typos you may want to look for.Author's response
...Ooohh, I found them! fixes typos ^_^
Thank you much! hugs
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