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• I NEED HELP :)

  (#) Vengefulscout 2011-11-05

  I can give you a hand if you want :)
  How long do you want it? I can start writing it now :)
  
  Emily :D

  Author's response

  However long u can come up with :) just put it on this review thing :) thank you so much!! Do u want like a small part in it? Cuz I don't have anymore big parts left, well not that I know of anyway :)

• I NEED HELP :)

  (#) Vengefulscout 2011-11-05

  Its up to you. I can be in it if you want :) Here is what i came up with
  (sorry if there are any speling mistakes):
  
  The lonely crystal moon tonight
  Every little moment fills my heart with fright
  Unknown creatures whisper past my eyes
  Coming from the deep, dark, evil monster cries
  
  Flee with the new night
  Hide from the light of the moon
  Run, before sunlight
  Quick, she is after you
  
  Hurry now,the clock is ticking, you need to get away
  She can find you in the darkest shadows in the night and day
  Excape before the time beats you and witching hour's past
  Oh god help me I just want to live again.
  Doom for the dreams
  
  Darkend corners watch me go by
  Child laughters chill me, make me cry
  I dont want to be dead by the end of day
  Leave me now, fade away
  The girl is a deamon in the moon light
  
  Scream to the night
  Bow before the moon
  Fall for the last time
  Now, let her take you
  
  Hurry now,the clock is ticking, you need to get away
  She can find you in the darkest shadows in the night and day
  Excape before the time beats you and witching hour's past
  Oh god help me i just want to live again.
  Doom for the dreams
  
  (guitar solo)
  
  Hurry now,the clock is ticking, you need to get away
  She can find you in the darkest shadows in the night and day
  Excape before the time beats you and witching hour's past
  Oh god help me I just want to live again.
  I want to feel alive.
  
  She can find you in the darkest shadows in the night and day
  Excape before the time beats you and witching hour's past
  Oh god help me I just want to live again.
  Doom for all the dreams

  Author's response

  Can I cancel out the last paragraph cuz I want the vocalist to scream at the last part so ALIVE is a very good word to scream :) and great lyrics! U r awesome! Thank you soooo much!!!

• I NEED HELP :)

  (#) Vengefulscout 2011-11-05

  Yeah, you can edit as much as you want :) And thanks always happy to help :D
  
  Emily :)
  

• I NEED HELP :)

  (#) xxMetalxFreak69 2011-11-05

  Here's a verse that just popped up :D
  
  Take a bullet to the brain
  Pick up all the bloody remains
  Clean all the dirty red stains,
  Our love is shattered, broken, dead,
  Don't bother crying a water shed
  
  Cause I won't come crawling,
  Won't start begging,
  Won't plead for pity or your fucking sympathy.
  
  You can bleed yourself dry, I won't cry.
  Won't listen to your screaming when I told you I was leaving.
  I'll disappear and won't come back.
  
  Honey you just lost the best fucking love you had.

  Author's response

  thank you !! :D Do u want a small part for the characters like fans? cuz i need some names :)

• I NEED HELP :)

  (#) xxMetalxFreak69 2011-11-05

  yeah sure why not? :)
  Real name or fake?

  Author's response

  whichever one you want me to put in :)

• I NEED HELP :)

  (#) xxMetalxFreak69 2011-11-05

  Real name's Chantelle. French but i can hardly speak it. >_> the fuck? anyway need a description?

  Author's response

  A short one will do :)

• I NEED HELP :)

  (#) akeala1089 2011-11-05

  For one night
  half hidden
  barely veiled
  the face of reality
  hidden behind
  false identity
  can't escape this
  false reality
  
  Well. Yup. That's what I got, I hope it can help in some way. XP

  Author's response

  yes it will help :) but i'm gonna add some more lyrics if that's okay with you :) can i get a character name? if u want to be in it that is :D

• I NEED HELP :)

  (#) akeala1089 2011-11-05

  Athena
  white chin length bangs, bright blue and dark blue mix of top hair, black bottom (Hajor hair flips look like the ocean) minorly curly, female, full lips, large nose, square face, Caucasian. Band shirts and lolita skirts
  Outgoing, insane, kind, bi, easily irritated, fun, not a crier.
  Ahh...you said you wanted names and such...So, voila.XP

• I NEED HELP :)

  (#) Vengefulscout 2011-11-05

  Okay, i'll be in it if you'd like. :)
  
  Emily Toye
  Looks:Long brown ahir, silver-blue eyes, pale, 5'5, no make-up.
  
  Clothes: Band tee's, jeans,black converse and fingerless gloves.
  
  Personality: Shy, quiet kind, self, concious and caring, can get easily offended, will lash out at anyone who hurts her friends, can cry VERY easily.
  
  Hapy Story Writing

• I NEED HELP :)

  (#) xxMetalxFreak69 2011-11-05

  description: ebony black hair worn in bunches, green-hazel eyes, pale, 4;10, black eye make up.
  
  Clothes: Band tees, skinny jeans, black belt, leather jacket, converse and striped arm bands.
  
  Personality: Stubborn, sarcastic, artistic, short tempered, funny and outgoing. Bi, veggie and random

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