Categories > Cartoons > Class of the Titans > Cloning Experiments
Jay made a grave mistake! but it is all only the beginning.
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Cloning Experiments
(#) Pheonee 2006-06-16
Hard to follow, that's all. Try makeing Atlanta and atlanta a bit different...say with the good Atlanta still Atlanta and the evil one Alana, Athena, Amy etc...STILL too many exclamiation marks lying around.Author's response
Thanks for the advise.=) But it would be very hard to change the character's name once the story is released. i hope you would understand.
Thanks for reviewing anyway, i'm really very grateful.Cloning Experiments
(#) 999 2006-06-22
THE ONLY EXPRESSION ME AND MY 4OTHER FRIENDS HAVE AFTER READING IT "..................................................................................................................."Author's response
Please be more specific. I don't really get it.
Thanks.
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