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we all wanna die like movie stars
(#) JesusKetchum31 2006-07-29
Well, there's potential in this here fic, but I think I'll pass on further reading. Think about what you're trying to say with a fanfic like this. Are you just pretending that you're having this little adventure with the boys of AFI... or do you have something important to say about the world or who they are? Further, wouldn't it be better, if his is just your fantasy, to embelish it and make it.. well, readable? You have some interesting ideads, but they're executed in a way that shows irreverence for the band and the language. Keep working at it. You've got potential, but it's a long road.we all wanna die like movie stars
(#) angeltearsburn 2006-10-21
hey i think your story was good and the other to people were really mean to you so i think you should keep going with the storywe all wanna die like movie stars
(#) missyblaqkblush 2008-04-04
I loovee this!!
Update soon please!
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