(#) tortillachip 2011-12-10I really like this. Its hard to believe that you don't write much poetry, it seems like you've been writing it for a long time. It flows very naturally. I really like your killjoy name. Mine is Cellophane After, which I don't really like but will have to deal with because if I came up with my own it would be something stupid like Blueberry Orange or some nasty gum flavor. I am a very un-creative individual.
Author's responseThank you sooo much; I'm pleased that you think this went okay.
Your Killjoy name is awesome; way better than mine!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such an encouraging review! :)
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-11That is a really good poem. It was very well written and very good rhymes! I like you killjoy name. Mine is quite like it in fact. Its Cyanide Spark. I really like this. Your very good at writing poetry!
Author's responseAwesome killjoy name!
Thank you very much; I'm really happy that you think this is alright!
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