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Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2011-12-10
I have to say, this whole story is heart wrenching. But it's also superbly written, and the plot line is SUPER interesting. So yeah, keep up the god writing and please UPDATE SOON!!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm extremely pleased that you think this interest and well written, it's very nice of you to say so. I'll try my best to update ASAP! Thank you sooo much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-10
I don't know where to start with this. This is absolutely, positively amazing! I don't know why almost every time you write that you think what you wrote is bad. It kinda bums me out a little because that means that you are a bit, a lot a bit crazy because everything you write is the complete and utter opposite. I always worry that my reviews don't come across as honest. I always worry if I've chosen the wrong words or if it is phrased in such a way that it'll seem like I'm commenting because I wanted to hear the sound of the keyboard clicks and there's no better way to hear that than by typing out a review to a fanfiction story. I bet they're pretty boring to read too. I really believe that what you write is beautiful and that you can write no wrong in my eyes. I wish that my reviews could express how much I love your writing, not just this story, but just about every one that you have up here. I can honestly say that I really truly and truly really LOVE this chapter, love this story, and love your writing. I hope you can see that. Now I shall leave another comment about the actual story because I don't want it to be too much too read if I squish it into one comment.Author's response
Wow. Thank you; really, thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a genuinely touching review!
I always adore reading your reviews; they are never boring and I regard your opinion highly. They always help me to write, especially your reviews because of the amazingly thoughtful detail within them.
Thank you so sooooo sooooooooo SOOOOOO much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-10
As I said before, this is beautiful. When you hear such a beautiful, nice kid say something as ugly as saying that he wished he could have died is so disheartening. If Frank had any hope left in the world it has surely disappered into thin air. Mikey is so undeserving of the beatings and insults that make their way to him every day, and to see him like he is because of those beatings, crying and bleeding and wishing he was dead, kills Frank on the inside. It makes Frank want to be there for him. Be the person that he could talk to about it because it's very clear that Mikey has had enough. Before, Mikey was afraid to even make one little sound around Frank, yet here he is screaming about being bullied and how stupid he is. That was very clear, vivid imagery. I also really liked how Frank was like "No. I can’t think like that. Not now. I’m ashamed for even letting it cross my mind; I can’t believe that I could even consider being so selfish. Because it would be because I don’t love him. I just think that he’s cute. I don’t love him, not like I love Gerard." If he has to reassure himself that he loves Gerard in that romance movie with the happy ending way, therefore Gerard, not Mikey, is the only person that Frank should be thinking about when it comes to velvety lips, it shows that Frank is most definitely confused about what he feels for Mikey. He loves Gerard, without a doubt, but what is it that he really feels for Mikey? Anyway, I also really like how Mikey can't promise Frank that he'll believe he's worth something and is not a freak. I thought that that part was amazing. It revealed to Frank exactly what Mikey feels about himself and why he feels that way. It shows how much he's been affected by the people who hurt him. It also makes him wonder how it got to that point. How did it get so far that he wants to die? It's very sad. I also really like the ending. I was a bit surprised as well when Mikey said Gerard used to beat him. I kinda thought that that would be Mikey's secret, only for himself. I liked that he told, though. It was very, very clever to make him do that. I hope Mikey tells Frank that Gerard doesn't know that he used to hurt Mikey. It's true that Frank's love for Gerard is pure, but he can't help but feel disgusted that he did that. Terrific job, as always.Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm glad that you liked it!
Your interpretation is spot on; Mikey has head enough and Frank is quiet confused.
Thank you ver much for taking the time to leave such a detailed review; you've made me smile! :)Fate's Cruel if Life's Great
(#) SyraStrange 2011-12-10
OH MY GAWWWDD... How do you- Why- How the- THIS IS NOT CRAPPY!!! Damn; I mean seriously, if this is crappy to you, I'd like to see the one you wrote that makes you proud. SHOW IT TO ME... :D :D :D Well... Too bad for Gerard... But YES! Mikey gets some action . >:P Tell our short man to bring it. BRING IT, BEYOTCH! Oop; that was directed towards Frank, not you. {{TOO MUCH KHANDEHHH... HYPERNESSS!!!!}} PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'LL TOTALLY LOVE YOU FOR IT. I WILL LITERALLY DONATE MY KIDNEY IF YOU NEEDED IT. I'D SELL IT TO THE BLACK MARKET FOR YOU!!! :D I HAVE TO GO NOW BECAUSE I'M SURE I JUST BROKE MY ALLCAPSBUTTON,AWDAMNITHINKIBROKETHESPACEBARTOO...Author's response
:D Thank you very much; I'm so happy they you liked it!
I don't want your kidney, but Oreos made of gold would be pretty good. ;D
thank you very much for leaving such a nice review; sorry about your keyboard buttons! :)
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