- Yay! Another one! As far as the french, simplification is the only correction I'd make on "thank you" it's just "Merci" =)
Author's response(: Thank for for the review! I really appreciate hearing from you on stories!
Also, thank you so much for the assistance with french. I'm a french failure lol. I just wanted to add... to Rian's character. I don't know. I like to make my characters as realistic in my mind as I can and so, though me(the writer) is not french... my character is haha.
- It's cute to see Gee's softer side. I have a feeling his twisted side may be a problem though. :o Maybe it's just me. Haha. I'm looking forward to the next update. :)
Haha, maybe a tiny problem. ;)
Thank you so much for your continued feedback!
The next chapter is up. Hopefully you'll enjoy.
(#) midnight_star22 2012-01-01I think its great so far. I'm just worried about when his sick side makes a reappearance..update soon please (:
Author's responseThe next update is up. (:
Hope you enjoy.
And thank you so much!
... and his sick side will be presenting itself shortly.
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