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Perfectly Imperfect
(#) SyraStrange 2012-01-04
I always thought it was impossible to fix someone. I still do. Pete... I don't know, it's going to take some time for me to warm up to him. After all that Mikey's been through since Frank found him in the alley, and Pete just coming in, it's going to be very bumpy unless he gets his fill of what's going on. I know he didn't know any better when said the thing about playing in traffic, but once I read that I wanted to smack him upside the head. But like I said, I'll warm up to him. As for Gerard, I don't know what to make of him anymore. I hate him so, but I realize how alike we are, also how much I don't hate him, and it sucks cuz that indirectly means I hate myself... -.- Update...please?Author's response
I know that this might sound a little strange, but I'm kinda pleased that you're not too sure about Pete; it's nice to hear about reasons why he might not be such a good idea for Mikey as poor old Mikey has been through a hell of a lot. But I'm really glad that you think you'll warm up to him as I doubt he is going to be leaving any time soon.
I'll try to update tonight (homework permitting).
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-01-04
Sadorable. Though slightly more sad than adorable....whatever. I love this story, and I like this chapter. It's the thing I look forward to while I'm sitting boredly in Spanish :)Please update soon!
OXO
oh, and I nearly had an asthma attack from the ental image of Pete Wentz dying a hamster green with universal indicator. XDAuthor's response
Thank you very much; I'm really pleased that you like this story/chapter! I wasn't too sure about it, as with most other chapters, so knowing that you think it's alright is really encouraging.
I'll try to update tonight, depending on whether my english teacher decides to give me hideous amounts of homework or not. Either way, I will endeavour to update.
I'm glad that you liked the whole hamster thing, it was pretty fun for me to imagine, too!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-04
This story... Oh I don't know anymore. It's just too fucking brilliant. I love it! Pete is such a sweetheart. But Gerard the bastard has gone too far with mikey so it will be quite a long time before Pete can get Mikey back to normal ( as in Mikey's normality) again. Please update. Your stories are just too good to miss!Author's response
Aw, thank you so, so very much; it really is extremely lovely of you to say such nice things!
Pete is definitely a sweetheart and Gerard has definitely gone a little too far with poor old Mikey.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review; you've made me smile! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) MCRmilify 2012-01-04
I really love that Pete is an actual character, not just the loving boyfriend. He makes mistakes sometimes, but he always has good intentions. I don't exactly love the way he deals with Mikey's issues, but it's better than not dealing with them at all.
Oh and as for the last chapter, not crap at all, wonderful as always :]
at first (I can't remember which chapter this was :s) I was really excited 'cause Mikey almost sort of kinda taking himself into consideration and I almost got up and sang, or whatever people do when they're really happy.
It was just one tiny little thought of a fictional character, but it made me so happy.
I hope Mikey doesn't have to go to the hospital...
I hope there aren't more conflicts at Pete's house.
Thank you for writing :]
I really don't know how I write reviews, mostly all that goes through my head after reading is a large line of keysmashes, but that probably wouldn't convey much...Author's response
With Pete I wanted to make him seem like the perfect boyfriend at first, but then I wanted to make him seem more human in the respect that he does have a few flaws, but he does love Mikey and just wants to deal with Mikey's problems.
Thank you very much; I'm so pleased that you thought the last chapter was alright!
I'm really pleased that some part of this story made you happy, I'm more used to being told that what I write is sad/depressing so it's really nice to hear that it evoked positive emotion for once!
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-04
Fantastic! This is really great, like always. I love how protective Pete is, he really seems prefect for Mikey. A protector, a lover, and a friend, everything the poor kids needs! xD Awesomeness. Excited for more :DAuthor's response
Aw, thank you soooo much; it's really extremely uplifting to hear that you tihnk this chapter went alright.
I'm pleased that you think Pete is perfect for Mikey, your reasoning as to why is almost exactly what my thoughts were when I was planning this story out.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-01-05
AWWWWWW -swoons- Peteypetepetepetepete he is top boyfriend! Fantastic chapter update soon? C:Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm soooo glad that you think this chapter's alright!
I'll try to update later on tonight.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-05
Another fantastic chapter! And this time, when I finished reading, I sort of felt like dancing around everywhere because happiness and Pete and Pete will help Mikey get better but also later conflicts and /Gerard trouble later on/.
Basically this really had me thinking about all the different possibilities of the story and everything you've written so far.
By the way-I really loved that bit about playing in traffic. I thought it was great that Pete can make mistakes too, but it also shows how much Mikey trusts him with how easily he lets it go after knowing that Pete is truly sorry.Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm soooo pleased that you thought this chapter was happy!
With the playing-in-traffic thing I wanted to show that Pete, whilst undeniably amazing, isn't perfect. So kind of exactly what you picked up on.
Thank you sooo much for taking the time to review!! :)
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