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Perfectly Imperfect
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-07
I love this chapter as much as Pete loves Mikey. It is quite disturbing what Mikey gets himself into during his nightmare thing. It's really sad. But none the less a terrific story! The last part when Mikey fell asleep was really sweet. You are excellent at writing this. I don't know how but everytime you write something I just seem to love! Keep updating please!!!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm soooo pleased that you liked this chapter!
I kinda wanted what Mikey did to be a little disturbing so that it would, I dunno, shock(?) people into thinking that he really isn't happy and would be enough to make Pete see that something serious really is going on in Mikey's head. Sorry that it was sad, I hope that it wasn't too depressing.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review; it really does help me to write! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) SyraStrange 2012-01-07
I'm glad Pete handled Mikey that way. Kudos for him. I'm still... I don't know... Pete's really nice, and he's so good to Mikey. But why can't I like him?! Seriously, what the fuck is wrong with me? -.-
I've got to hand it to you, you're a boss at all things mental, what people are thinking and what they feel, as compared to me, where I suck at explaining that kind of stuff. You're such an amazing writer. Update when you want to, don't strain yourself over this story... c:Author's response
There is nothing wrong with not liking Pete, in fact it's really cool to hear your views on him. Perhaps it's because he seems a little hotheaded with people other than Mikey?
Thank you very much, but I've read your stories and I know for a fact that what you write really is amazing.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-07
Terrific, as usual! Pete's amazing. And Mikey, holy fuck :O Poor kid, he's so damaged and he just needs someone to fix him is all D: I loved this chapter. Moreeeeee :DAuthor's response
Thank you so very much; I'm really pleased that you liked this chapter!
Yeah, Pete is pretty much amazing.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) tortillachip 2012-01-07
This is really great! It's a little unfair because Pete doesn't even know Gerard and why he acts the way he does, and he can always say he knows all he needs to know about Gerard, but he still doesn't know anything other than what he saw the say he came over, what Mikey told him, and things he just guessed. He doesn't understand that Gerard is so worried about not giving Mikey what he believes he needs that he is blinded to the fact that Mikey is having real problems, not just being a whiny, annoying baby. I like that Pete doesn't like Gerard, though. If he didn't, the story would turn out totally different. Now on a different note. Pete loves Mikey with such a passion, that should be enough to ward off every bad nightmare (memory) but it's not and Mikey is bleeding and thrashing and Pete can't wake him up. I'm glad to see that Pete is getting that feeling of helplessness. I think that worked really well because if he was strong it just wouldn't work. I don't know why, but it just wouldn't. I like that Pete is like "I don't know what to do!" It kind of makes him seem like he thinks he's not fit to be taking care of Mikey. Here he is saying that Gerard shouldn't be able to take care of Mikey, and when Mikey is here convulsing and trying to scratch his face off, he has no idea what to do. I actually think that Pete is sort of like Gerard because they both get so nervous about giving Mikey what he needs that they sort of just get a little... I don't know what the word is. I don't know if that made any sense, but I tried. Anyway, I really liked that Mikey is starting to open up more and more to Pete and he's telling him something he hadn't even told Gerard until too late. He trusts him, and it really shows. I liked that Mikey apologized for waking up Pete. Of course, he doesn't want anybody's anger/discomfort to be his fault, but after he practically ripped his face and arms off, he still managed to apologize for something like that. I really like this chapter. You're so good at capturing emotions. You kind of feel sad for Pete because he has to watch the person he loves suffer and hurt and he doesn't know what to do, and you're even more sad when Pete hears of Gerard's abuse, but then you're kind of like "awww" at the end. It was really sweet. It's one of those moments where you believe that they can get through anything together. Well, I loved this chapter. I thought it was really well written and you really do a great job with emotion, not just in this, but in everything you write. The reader feels everything the characters feel. This is beautiful. Wonderful, terrific, fabulous job.Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you think this went alright!
Pete is definitely being a little unfair to Gerard, he's just assuming that Gerard is a bad person before he's even gotten to properly know him purely because he hates the idea of anyone hurting Mikey, but he still needs to try and see the side of Gerard that Mikey and Frank obviously do. If that made any sort of sense.
I'm relieved that you like Pete's dislike of Gerard, I was worried that it seemed sorta out of place so it's good to hear that you think it adds something to the direction of the story.
I wanted to show that Pete is really just a kid too, albeit that he is two years older than Mikey, and a kid who's never had to deal with something like this before. So it scares him because he doesn't know how to make everything better for the person that he loves the most. I'm really pleased liked that whole 'what do I do' aspect of it, I wasn't sure if I did it right. I also wanted to show that Pete and Gerard maybe aren't as different as they would both like to think in the respect that they both just want to give Mikey what he needs.
I'm happy that you liked that Mikey apologized, I kinda liked writing that little part. He apologized for the exact reasons you specified; he just doesn't want to upset anyone, least of all his boyfriend.
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely, detailed review; it really does mean a hell of a lot to me! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-01-07
It's so sad how Mikey stared hurting himself in his sleep :( if you looked up sadorable in the dictionary, and for seom reason it was in there, this story would be the definition. I love it. please update soon.
OXOAuthor's response
Sorry that it was sad. Yay, sadorable; I swear to God that's the best word I've ever heard/read!
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-01-08
Go kick his ass Pete! I don't know if you have been able to tell, but I don't like Gerard. The way you wrote about Mikey's nightmares really pulled on my heart strings as did Pete's little speach at the end. The dialog was great there is no need to worry about it. Oh those two are the perfect couple. I can't help but wonder what's happening with Frank and Gee though I mean Mikey's ran off into the cold night for all they know he could be in the same place as the prequal CARE MORE YOU GUYS IT'S MIKEYYYY. Super awesome chapter! C:Author's response
I don't think that Pete needs any encouragement to go kick Gerard's ass. ;P
I'm glad that you don't like Gerard in this story, it's really interesting to hear what people think of the characters.
Thank you very much, I'm really relieved that you think the dialogue was alright as it is not my strong point.
We will be hearing from both Frank and Gerard in the next chapter.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-01-08
I agree with everyone so much.
But I don't know what to say. This chapter was just so, so beautiful. Outstandingly amazing. Great job, once again.Author's response
Thank you so very, very much; I'm really glad that you think this chapter was okay! Thanks for taking the time to review; you've made me smile! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-08
I was panicking enough about what would happen at the end of last chapter but to imagine that actually happening to someone is absolutely awful, I just felt so sorry for all of them in the story-Gerard included.
But the way Pete can make Mikey come out of his shell once again made me feel extremely happy, and hopefully just talking about things will at least make Mikey feel slightly better.
Really great chapter! And it eased the pain of the football I'm currently watching (Don't know what country you're from, but Manchester City aren't having the greatest time ever in the derby against United).Author's response
I'm sorry that it made you panic, it really wasn't my intention. I'm pleased that you feel sorry for Gerard, it wasn't really his fault that he got dragged down with that sort of stuff and he never intended to hurt his little brother.
I'm glad that Pete made you happy, I didn't want it to be all doom and gloom for once!
Thank you very much; I'm really happy that you think this chapter was alright! I'm from England and have been made painfully aware of the Football by many a livid Facebook friend.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) fearsgottahold 2012-01-08
Why are you so amazing at writing? seriously, you just made me cry. If I had half as much talent as you I would be happy forever. This was an excellent chapter, just like always. Please update soon!Author's response
I'm really not an amazing writer, I just have way too much time on my hands and end spewing this crap out. Sorry that this made you cry.
I've read your writing and I know for a fact that you've got at least ten times the amount of talent as me; your writing is exciting and interesting to read, where as mine is all dull and dragged-out. So don't put yourself down.
The next chapter is written and will be up tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) PatbtrthnPete 2012-01-08
This was amazing and it made me cry.
Author's response
Thank you very much and sorry that it made you cry! :)
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