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Chapter Sixteen
41 reviewsSpontaneous nose licking, the dangers of sex-crazed lunacy, and evil unicorn fuckers...
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"Be My Detonator."
(#) MidnightSNoise 2012-01-08
drinking strawberry yogurt and reading khljsdgkfalkdghlsdfgh!!!! I'll drown! OMFG! It's fucking awesome! >:D!!! I always love your fics c: You always makes my days with this! I love you dude - please, PLEASE! keep writing♥
xoxoMidnight's Noise :D!"Be My Detonator."
(#) amos222 2012-01-08
FINALLY!!!!!!! Finally, they kissed. That was so hilarious and perfect and… I love this so much. I can't wait for the next chapter."Be My Detonator."
(#) Niamh04 2012-01-08
Omg. That was the most amazing thing ever.
I love this. Seriously. You deserve an award. All the awards.
I'm dying.
Please post a new chapter.
The drooling morons in my head demand it.
"Be My Detonator."
(#) pepper17 2012-01-08
yesyesyesyesYES! I've been waiting for the frerard moment and it was spectacular"Be My Detonator."
(#) xXkillj0yXx 2012-01-09
YAAY! THAT WAS AMAAAAZING!! :DD No, but seriously, it was awesome.
I absolutely love this story, and I almost can't wait for the next chapter :3"Be My Detonator."
(#) brandedforeverlame 2012-01-09
fucking finally!!! they finally kissed!!!! this was frickin hilarious! XD"Be My Detonator."
(#) PartyPooperX 2012-01-09
WOW that was hot. You, my friend, are one hell of a smutty writer.
“Are you licking my nose?”
“Uhh...no?”
“What are you doing, then?”
“Umm….massaging your nose with my tongue?”
Made me laugh so hard I'm slightly worried for my lungs.
Wish I could write makeout scenes like you. You make my writing look pathetic.
SF
"Be My Detonator."
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-01-09
Ah, goddamn. Above review written by moi, not by my sister. She's not quite as perverted as I am."Be My Detonator."
(#) XBrokenGhostX 2012-01-09
omg i died with happiness fangirl squeal
okay
you just brought out my inner fangirl
this rarely happens
this is so osom
i kid you not
does this make it half ok that Ray's cheating on jamie or what
OOooOoOoO SuSpEnSe o.O
Update soon :D :D :D :D :D"Be My Detonator."
(#) stephaniebuchan 2012-01-09
This keeps emailing me saying you updated and then you havent and im all ;~;
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