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9 reviews"I’m just fine with what I’ve got." Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
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Guardian Ghost
(#) TheDisenchanter91080 2012-01-16
I love it! I really like how frank is deciding whiter he likes Mikey or not! Its so amazing so far. Update whenever you can :)
Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm so pleased that you liked it!
I'll try to update tonight, homework permitting.
Thank you for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-16
Wow. I can tell this is going to be great story! I'm definitley going to continue reading this. It's a really good storyline so far. I like how you keep Gerard in it and how he sort of seems to be haunting Frank right now. I love Mikey's character. You can by just reading this chapter he is filled with so much emotion but he doesn't seem to care whether he even exists or not. I can't wait to see more. Update when you can! :)Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm really glad that you're gonna continue reading this!
You're right about Gerard haunting Frank for the moment, I'm pleased that you liked that because I wasn't too sure if it worked or not. I'm happy that you like Mikey's character, he has a lot of things going on in his head but he just doesn't care about himself or the outside world any more.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) fearsgottahold 2012-01-16
Wowowowowowowowowowowow. It may be possible that I like this fic more than I like your old one. No actual shit. I have a thing for supernatural fics:3 but wow, I love how up himself Frank is, and how creepy, but cool Gerard is (I'm well glad you managed to get him in there) and mikey is just a babe. Yep, I'm loving this fic, and its only on chapter one. Please update soon you loveable person!:DAuthor's response
Thank you soooo much; I'm really glad that you like this!
I've never written a supernatural fic before, so I hope that I'm doing it alright. I was worried that I didn't do a good job with Frank and that his up-himself-ness didn't work, so I'm very happy that you liked that aspect of it!
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-01-16
aha! Gerard's gonna get revenge for Mikey from beyond the grave. Cool. I love this story! Frank's a bitch! Poor Mikey. Please update soon!
OXOAuthor's response
Yep, Gerard's gonna be looking out for his brother.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) tyyneyy 2012-01-16
I don't usually read this kind of fiction, but this got my interest immediately. The beginning looks very promising. I like the idea that Gerard still protects his little brother. I can so imagine how he makes sure that nobody messes with his Mikey. :D
I love this already! I will certainly read the whole story. I'm looking forward to it. :)
And you are such a good writer, you got all those emotions so vividly written. I admire you so much. :)Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm sooo pleased that this has your interest, that's all I really want when I write something is to make it interesting.
I'm glad that you like the idea of Gerard protecting Mikey, he is definitely not going to let anyone mess with his little brother!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review, you've made me smile! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) PatbtrthnPete 2012-01-16
Amazing.
Poor sad Mikey :'(
Bwahaha get him Gee!Author's response
:DGuardian Ghost
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-16
This is awesome, you never fail to amaze me :D I can tell this is gonna be a great story, keep writing!Author's response
Thank you soooooo much; I'm really pleased that you like this! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-01-17
I love Frank's character and how he contradicts himself constantly this story is really interesting so far and I can't wait to see hwre you take it!Author's response
Thank you very much; I'm soooo pleased that you like Frank's character. I wasn't sure if I liked the way I was writing him, so I'm really happy that you think he was alright!
It's really encouraging to hear that you think this is interesting, that's all I can really ask of what I write; that people find it interesting and not boring.
Thank you soooo much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-17
Nice Gerard, not nice Frank. Oh well, it's a compromise of sorts xD
I liked how Frank was so obviously in denial, and how frustrated this lie he'd built up made him around everyone, mainly Mikey. I can only hope Gerard makes him realise how broken Mikey is, and how he isn't just some traumatised kid.Author's response
Frank is definitely in denial in this story, he just needs the right person to make him realize that...
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)
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