(#) benzedrine_barbie 2012-01-21OH. MY. HOT. DAMN. This is my favorite thing you've ever done, I think. The first two paragraphs are literally so beautiful and the whole chapter is really well-done; the theme of darkness and that sort of anonymity giving Frank courage is a fuckin' cool idea, and he and Mikey are so cute, and it was so nice to see Gerard in a new light - this is gonna be one awesome fic. And thanks for dedicating it to meeee!!! It means a lot. You're wonderful :D xoxoxo
Author's responseAwww, thank you so much, that means a lot...and thanks so much for your advice- without it, I doubt this chapter would have been written. So really, you have yourself to thank for it xD you rock, thanks so much for sticking with this!
- Wow. The part where he and Mikey talk to each other... it was so sweet. I loved it, the way Frank cares about him, and poor little Mikey with his mousiness and poor self-confidence. And Gerard, ugh. He's so mean towards Frank, but you know he doesn't mean it. He's just so protective of himself, hiding his feelings and such. I'm sure Frank is gonna get through to him though, I know he is.
Amazing chapter, just amazing. Don't doubt yourself. If anyone should do that, it's me. Love this story do fucking much. :)
Update anytime you feel you can, it'll be worth the wait. :)
Author's responseEeee, thank yooooou!! Very perceptive view on Gerard there, btw xD And you shall wait and seee....thank you so freaking much, that really means a lot! I'll update sooooon :D
(#) Down-a-Rabbit-Hole 2012-01-21The characters are amazing, and the plot line is simply beautiful. I love this story more and more with every new chapter.
Please, never stop writing! You have a gift :)
Author's responseThank you, I'm so happy you think so (: I do enjoy writing it, so it's nice to know that people enjoy reading it xD I don't plan on stopping :D thank you so much, what you've said means a lot!
- such a great chapter!
caring Frank is so sweet, i loove him :3
i loved the talk with Gerard too, and how frank knows he's hiding things.
Author's responseYay, thank you! I love Frank too :L glad you enjoyed the chapter...will update soon!
(#) AlysonRose 2012-01-21Omg Mikey and Frank are friends!!!!:D omg they are too cute! And I feel bad for Gerard in a way...? Idk but Franks new found confidence is going to be so amazing! I seriously love this story!(: update soon!!!:D
Author's responseHaha, glad you think so :D and I feel bad for Gerard too...thanks so much for reviewing!! :D
(#) CypherDetonation 2012-01-21This is just my opinion, and I don't know how much it matters to you, but I think this is the best chapter of this story you've written so far, maybe even of all of the stories you've ever written. I love how it gives off this sense of saddness, but there's still hope, especially at the end. Even though he's always seemed real, Frank never seemed all that human to me until this one chapter, because he always seemed to be sad or angry. This chapter shows that he feels other things, though. It shows that Frank is pretty much like everyone else. Also, Gerard seems more real now, too. At first he seemed somewhat perfect, but now he seems like there's more to him. Great chapter, keep writing!
Author's responseThank you so freaking much, this review literally made my day. I was unsure about this chapter, but I'm feeling a lot better about it now (: thanks so much for taking the time to give me a long review, it really means a lot :D
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