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Beating out of Time
2 reviewsI look into his eyes, regretting it straight away because I can't seem to find a way out of them. He's beyond perfect, it's not even humanly possible.
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Stranger
(#) fearsgottahold 2012-01-22
I really like this fic, its dark and interesting. The only bad thing I would say is that you don't want to rush things- like make the relationship between the two really strong, really quickly, otherwise in my opinion the story isn't as good. But apart from that- great storyline and great characterisation. Umm.. Could you look at my fic? If it isn't too difficult... It's called Give 'Em Hell, Kid. Thank you. Please update soon!Author's response
Thanks for the advice! I'll make sure i slow it down(: Thank you XD No problem, i'll read your story(: and I will update todayStranger
(#) killjoy_blackrose 2012-01-22
haha i loved it:3 gerard bit frankie D: but yep you shouldn't rush things, though to me it didn't seem like you do:) anyway, it's your story so write it like you want. i'm sure it's awesome (c'mon it's a vampire fic, i'm bound to love it) x kAuthor's response
Haha thanks! I'll slow it down hehe. Vampire fics are awesome XD Thanks so much for the review xo
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