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A Slave's Story
3 reviewsThis is about a young Slave that becomes something more to the prince of Egypt
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A Slave's Story
(#) The-Dark-Side 2006-08-09
Fine stroy...but you have to sepreate it into paragraphs! My eyes are going buggy!Author's response
Thank you very much.... I really appreciate the review. but some reason that I wasn't able to do it the way I wanted it... but when I finally have the second chapterI'll try to have it in paragraphs... if you want it the way I have it... I'll send it to you by email...
Thank you again for reviewing my story...A Slave's Story
(#) 101010hd 2007-10-05
i can't read the story like this. so much text, so little space... i'm trying to read it though...
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