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I Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
26 reviewsYou've never seen this username before. Soon, you won't be able to forget it.
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I Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
(#) Heartbreak_Beauty 2012-01-27
Um....
O.O
You ok?I Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
(#) SyraStrange 2012-01-27
TheIntrovert, huh? I'm guessing you want to mind-fuck the lot, so be my guest. You seem interesting. Good job. You have puzzled me, but then again I am American....Author's response
Thank you, dear.I Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
(#) PartyPoisen 2012-01-27
Yeah, This is justseems like a random ramble by someone looking for attention so people read your stories.
This is one way of doing that? trying to confuse people. It is intriguing to me that you try mystery as a point of trying to cinfuse people.
As you're not suppose to judge by the cover but what i see is a is a mask fellow that thrives on attention by the presence of confusion and rubbish annoying ranting to get the attention of the general audience that will read such things as these. and Most of us do.Author's response
Each to their own, I suppose.
Writing isn't my immediate plan, I have so much more to give first. Confusion? I have merely explained why I have chosen to create this account my dear, in fact, I explained it in the simplest format I could. I am terribly sorry if you can't keep up with the message.I Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
(#) thegirlwhowasonfire 2012-01-27
Like another person said, you do seem rather interesting. I'm definitely curious about you.I Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
(#) SimplexMinded 2012-01-27
i have no idea what i just read but it was kinda awesome. Makes me think of some internet hacker who mind fuckes people into doing what he wants them too.....kinda makes me think of Ghost in the Shell if you ever watched that anime. Very awesome though :DI Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-01-27
Cool story bro. You're logic in all this amuses me thuroughly (I don't mean to sound mocking, it sincerely interests me, I like it) and to SimplexMinded... Ghost in the Shell=fuck yes. (Sorry for making you read that bit, TheIntrovert)
This website kind of is a mess, isn't it? Oh well, we love it anyway. Hm... I'm good with usernames, so I probably won't forget it. I just completely missed the point, didn't I? Oh well. If you were to read my blog you would be amazed I managed to stay this close to on-track. Luckily for everyone, you don't read my blog...
I like the mind fucking, for now.Author's response
Pure, unfiltered human interest is all I can hope for.
I do like the way you think.I Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
(#) RyanCyanideKiller 2012-01-27
I'm hoping you're not a troll because you seem incredibly intelligent and interesting.
If that was offensive, I apologise because that was not my intention.I Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
(#) mychemicalbitchbot 2012-01-27
Wait... you said you aren't here to create a story (yet)... so erm, if you'll confuse my thick-ness, why exactly are you here? To tell us what's wrong with our writing? (I'm American too, and we do seem to ba a rather thick lot, yeah? I do have writing tendencies that lean away from American, though. Not entirely my fault. The word "mom" just sounds icky. "Mum" I like much better.)
Well, please respond I'm curious. well, if it's not too much trouble XDAuthor's response
Ah, to reveal my intentions would be to spoil the surprise! Let's just say I'm here to.....broaden horizons and opportunities for writers.I Will Destroy The Mess That This Website Has Become
(#) Tierney6661 2012-01-27
First, I would like to help you out....
"The most wondrous thing is that the audience who shall read my stories will**KNOW***nothing of the author, therefore will be unable to judge the authenticity of the written pieces I create based on my likes, dislikes, social status and various other accommodating factors.">>>>>>>>>> Okay, I'm done trolling for now. Let's hope you finish soon as well. Good luck with the writing; I sincerely hope you make some corrections in your diction and syntax as you go on though.
P.S. If you’re a self proclaimed introvert, why are you putting shit like this out here? It's shamelessly rude, not to mention condescending. For all we know you're a little kid pretending to be a bad ass on your Mom's computer every night before bedtime. And this message of yours actually provides with a pretty good estimation of what your personality is like. As will your writing, because you did state that it will be based on your own tastes.
Also, have you ever heard of idioms? We'll see what culture you're a part of based on which ones you use and hint at. So, beside that, we'll also see which geographical areas you know more about because, of course, your stories will need to actually take place somewhere. Still thinking this was a great idea? Well, if yes, you're probably not thinking this out. Things like these don't really last too long before you get figured out, so try not to be so lofty. Have at it, V.
Author's response
Ah, thank you for the correction. Late night typing does not agree with my head.
As for the rest, I whole-heartedly agree. Well, with some points at least. I do have an awful way of writing sentences, which is a bad habit I've sadly had for years. I do not claim that I am a perfect writer as I know I am not.
Your points are valid, things I gave great thought before writing this. However, I feel that the website needs a little revitalization and I can only hope that I'm not the only one out there who's trying to bring the passion, mystery and love back into writing again.
-Introvert
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