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The Light
11 reviews"He really couldn’t be any more perfect for my brother, could he?" Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
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Guardian Ghost
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-02-05
Eeeeeeh that was so cute! :3 You didn't butcher it at all honestly it was great! and I'm voting Either Frikey or Pikey xDAuthor's response
Aw, thank you very much! I'll try and do a Frikey/Pikey tomorrow. Thanks for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) fearsgottahold 2012-02-05
Perfect.
That one word says it all, really. Cos I really think that entire fic was perfect. I loved it!:')
And do whatever you feel like doing- what you are most comfortable with. I know it will be great whatever partnership you choose:)
Ellie xo
Author's response
Aw, thank you so very much! I'm really, really pleased that you liked it!
I'll try my hardest not to disappoint; the one-shot will hopefully be up tomorrow, I might do two because I'm kinda torn between two pairings at the moment.
Thank you soooo much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) evil 2012-02-05
Don't apologise! I thought that story was fucking awesome!
And for your oneshot idea, write what you like. I pretty much love anything with Mikey in. My favourite is probably Rikey. But write whatever you want to :DAuthor's response
Thank you very much!
I've never written a Rikey before and I've wanted to for a while, so I'll try to do one of those. It will hopefully be up tomorrow or if not, the day after.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-02-05
I think you made a great ending! My heart melted when Mikey said that Gee would like him. I think it was fantastic! A great story And it sure as hell was worth the short wait!
In relation to your one shot, that's a tough question because I love anything with Mikey in them especially when you write. I can't pick just one so I'm gonna say either Frikey or Bikey or Pikey. Sorry I just love them allAuthor's response
Thank you very much; I'm honestly extremely relieved that you think the ending to this is alright!
I'll try to have a one-shot up tomorrow night.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-02-05
That wasn't a crappy ending, it was really great! Adorable, sweet, and surprisingly happy :D If you're flinging to write another, Pikey and Frerard are my favorites :3Author's response
Thank you very much, I'm really pleased that you didn't think that the ending was too bad! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) PatbtrthnPete 2012-02-05
Very sweet and amazing ending.Author's response
Thank you very much! :DGuardian Ghost
(#) TheDisenchanter91080 2012-02-06
I love it!! The ending was still amazing!! I would have to say Frikey or Bikey. Amazing ending still :)
Author's response
Thank you sooooooo much! I'm really relieved that you think that the ending went alright! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-02-06
Shitfuckdamn I forgot to review after I read this yesterday. I WAS IN FLOODS OF TEARS YOU HAVE NO IDEA GERARD HAD TO GO AND FRANK IS PERFECT FOR MIKEY AND MIKEY THINKS GERARD WOULD APPROVE OF FRANK BUT WILL NEVER FIND OUT THAT GERARD WAS ALWAYS THERE HERE COME THE TEARS AGAIN.
But I love you and this and everything so much and urgh and I kind of want to kiss you and all your stories but I would probably have to punch you and them first because they're too good.Author's response
I'm so sorry that this made you cry!
Thank you very much; I'm sooooo pleased that you like what I write, it really does mean a lot to hear that! But please don't punch me. ;P
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)Guardian Ghost
(#) tortillachip 2012-02-06
There really is no need to apologize! The ending was fabulous and it really is no big deal that you ended it this way. And at least you officially ended it. That is always better than no ending at all. Anyway, I really liked that this was in Gerard's point of view. It was really interesting to see what Gerard thought of everything that happened and how he really can tell that Mikey is much more important to Frank than what others think of him. I also really liked that Frank showed them that they can't hurt the person he's in love with and get away with it. And that he wasn't afraid to show them that he loves Mikey. That kiss was absolutely adorable! And also, the boy with the longing eyes! He probably sees how in love with each other they are and wishes he could have that too. I also liked that Frank was so busy in teaching Liam his lesson that he forgot to make sure Mikey was okay. But then he does and Mikey is almost instantly okay. And don't worry about leaving us with unanswered stuff. You answered the major questions and we can create a little fantasy of our own for all the little stuff. This was very sweet and I loved that Mikey initiated a kiss. And now they are boyfriends!!! That whole scene was so cute and romantic! I like sad stories and all that stuff, but I'm a real sucker for those cute, romance stories and scenes. Anyway, the title really fits the chapter. Frank is finally starting to see the light about accepting who you are even if others can't, and Gerard is going into the light because he doesn't need to stay when he fully knows Frank is capable of taking care of and Mikey is truly happy and in love and that a really good person loves him back. He was probably only a ghost to look after Mikey, but now Frank can take care of him and he can let go because he knows that Mikey is loved.
I feel kind of bad because I've read all the chapters but I haven't reviewed each one and told you how awesome they all are. But I can now. I can't even express how much I liked this. It really was beautiful and magnificent and was the perfect way to end this story. This story was very original and it was really fun to read. It was very emotional and vivid. Wonderful job!!!
There really is no need to apologize! The ending was fabulous and it really is no big deal that you ended it this way. And at least you officially ended it. That is always better than no ending at all. Anyway, I really liked that this was in Gerard's point of view. It was really interesting to see what Gerard thought of everything that happened and how he really can tell that Mikey is much more important to Frank than what others think of him. I also really liked that Frank showed them that they can't hurt the person he's in love with and get away with it. And that he wasn't afraid to show them that he loves Mikey. That kiss was absolutely adorable! And also, the boy with the longing eyes! He probably sees how in love with each other they are and wishes he could have that too. I also liked that Frank was so busy in teaching Liam his lesson that he forgot to make sure Mikey was okay. But then he does and Mikey is almost instantly okay. And don't worry about leaving us with unanswered stuff. You answered the major questions and we can create a little fantasy of our own for all the little stuff. This was very sweet and I loved that Mikey initiated a kiss. And now they are boyfriends!!! That whole scene was so cute and romantic! I like sad stories and all that stuff, but I'm a real sucker for those cute, romance stories and scenes. Anyway, the title really fits the chapter. Frank is finally starting to see the light about accepting who you are even if others can't, and Gerard is going into the light because he doesn't need to stay when he fully knows Frank is capable of taking care of and Mikey is truly happy and in love and that a really good person loves him back. He was probably only a ghost to look after Mikey, but now Frank can take care of him and he can let go because he knows that Mikey is loved.
I feel kind of bad because I've read all the chapters but I haven't reviewed each one and told you how awesome they all are. But I can now. I can't even express how much I liked this. It really was beautiful and magnificent and was the perfect way to end this story. I was really drawn into it. This story was very original and it was really fun to read. It was very emotional and vivid. Wonderful job!!!
Author's response
Thank you so, soooo, soooooooo very much: I'm really glad that you think the ending was alright!
Originally I started writing this in Mikey's point of view, but then I couldn't think of how to put it and I wanted to show that things worked out for Gerard too (despite the fact that he's dead) so I wrote it in Gerard's view point instead.
I'm really pleased that you found the kiss adorable, I was kinda worried about it seeming out of place or whatever, so to know that you thought it was adorable is really nice. I was hoping that someone would pick up on the boy with the longing eyes; you've interpreted him perfectly with regards to the fact that I wanted it to seem like he longs to be able to have what Frank has managed to find.
I'm glad that you got the double meaning of the chapter title; the first being the literal light that some people believe we go into when we die and the second being that both Frank and Mikey are starting to see the light of a better future.
Please don't feel bad about not reviewing, when you do review I love it because you always give me something to really think about and that more than makes up for anything that you haven't reviewed.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such an intricately detailed and kind review, it really does mean a lot! :)
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