One-shot in Second P.O.V.: Your father is a drunk and beats you. When you finally get the will to escape, can you get some help when all hope seems to abandon you? And will that hope come in the f...
One of the best fan-fiction stories I have ever read.Great use of synonyms and good sentence structure.I loved it.
Thanks! I really love reviews like this! Not that they all wern't great.
Wow. Great job, really. I've never read a story from second person POV, and this was a good first one. Amazingly worded, hilarious, and perfect in every way.
Poor Pete's socks though. I liked those, too bad I ruined them.... -sigh-
Yeah, it's fun to write in second point of view sometimes. Try something different, you know? I looove those socks too. Don't worry, I'm sure Pete has like a bajillion of them. :)
haha, just like you!
I love it! I wish I could write good one-shots, but I suck. Keep up the good work!
i wish i could write good long stories, but i suck, haha. and i shall keep up the work that is good! erm, wow, i'm starting to talk like yoda, hehe.
that was so adorkably cute i love it ^^
good to know i can write "cute" and demented. what a range, eh?
SO good! i loved everything about it! [especially the whole making out underwater thing] =]
this story was awsome! im happy to read a patrick story that is actually good
Ah! Oh my god. This one-shot was amazing. i absolutely loved it. patrick was just too cute haha. keep writing cause youre just that good of a writer ;D
wow im about a year or two late on this story huh? lol but i love ut
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