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I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)
14 reviewsOne-shot in Second P.O.V.: Your father is a drunk and beats you. When you finally get the will to escape, can you get some help when all hope seems to abandon you? And will that hope come in the f...
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I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)
(#) lovecantsaveyou 2006-07-06
One of the best fan-fiction stories I have ever read.Great use of synonyms and good sentence structure.I loved it.Author's response
Thanks! I really love reviews like this! Not that they all wern't great.I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)
(#) ScarsNStories 2006-07-09
Wow. Great job, really. I've never read a story from second person POV, and this was a good first one. Amazingly worded, hilarious, and perfect in every way.
Poor Pete's socks though. I liked those, too bad I ruined them.... -sigh-Author's response
Yeah, it's fun to write in second point of view sometimes. Try something different, you know? I looove those socks too. Don't worry, I'm sure Pete has like a bajillion of them. :)I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)
(#) sing4me09 2006-08-26
too cute!Author's response
haha, just like you!I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)
(#) ForNeverYours 2006-09-10
I love it! I wish I could write good one-shots, but I suck. Keep up the good work!Author's response
i wish i could write good long stories, but i suck, haha. and i shall keep up the work that is good! erm, wow, i'm starting to talk like yoda, hehe.I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)
(#) x-xJafax-x 2006-11-07
that was so adorkably cute i love it ^^Author's response
good to know i can write "cute" and demented. what a range, eh?I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)
(#) cherrybomb 2008-03-15
SO good! i loved everything about it! [especially the whole making out underwater thing] =]I'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)
(#) ithurts816 2008-04-03
this story was awsome! im happy to read a patrick story that is actually goodI'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)
(#) panicatthediscoxchik 2008-07-26
Ah! Oh my god. This one-shot was amazing. i absolutely loved it. patrick was just too cute haha. keep writing cause youre just that good of a writer ;DI'm Holding Out, I'm Holding On (Patrick Stump)
(#) falloutboynumber1fan 2009-01-18
wow im about a year or two late on this story huh? lol but i love ut
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