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Chapter Twenty
35 reviewsOver-inflated breadsticks, quivering postmen, and the abomination of flowery boxers....
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"Be My Detonator"
(#) brandedforeverlame 2012-02-10
askldfjaldskjf... O_o that. was. hot! well, minus the part when Jamie walked in. that part was frickin hilarious. XD
RIP Gerard & Frank
COD: castrated, then strangled to death by Jamie's demonic fury."Be My Detonator"
(#) ChasingPavementsxoxo 2012-02-10
THIS IS SO ASDFGHJKL AMAZING!! PLEASSEEE update soon!!! And that, my friend, was not a cliffhanger. That was a suicide jump off of the empire state building which was on the worlds biggest cliff. PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN I wanna know if jamie castrates Gerard and Frank!!!!! Amazing chapter, and you are definitely the most talented writer I've seen yet."Be My Detonator"
(#) AlysonRose 2012-02-10
Never never ever appolagize for making a chapter "too long" never could you make a chapter too long. Experkahsgaaj this was just wow.
PLEEEEAAASSSEEE UPDATE SSSSOOOOOOONNNNNN"Be My Detonator"
(#) Murderous_Music39 2012-02-10
i have said this wayyyy to many times but.. your my favorite author^^ seirously this was so good!! hahaha and i love the clifhanger xD haha"Be My Detonator"
(#) amos222 2012-02-10
Uuuuhhmmmmm… that was utterly perfect. I love you. I think your version of Frank is one of my all-time favorites out of any fanfiction. And your Gerard is freaking hilarious. Please update again soon."Be My Detonator"
(#) blackmaria 2012-02-10
My sides hurt
badly
i love this
i nearly fell off my chair
and when i saw you updated
i was like
'OH HELL YEAH!! :D '
this is so fucking funny!"Be My Detonator"
(#) XBrokenGhostX 2012-02-10
Oh my god. He came on his step-sister. He came on his stepsister. I'm dying omfg they are going to get murdered. This chapter was awesome, as usual, update soon!!"Be My Detonator"
(#) StormVandal 2012-02-10
OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD
That is just about the worst thing that could possibly have happened there!! Shit!! Poor Gerard and Frank!! They're in for it now!!"Be My Detonator"
(#) benzedrine_barbie 2012-02-10
Hah! The end was hilariously awkward, I loved it! May I just say that was one steaming...hot...sex scene andilovethisstoryandyou'rewonderfulandshouldneverbeinsecureaboutanythingyoupostbecauseiloveitALLtopieces. And I'll reply to your email, I swear, I just had a real long paper due today. Update soon, hugs and cookies, xo"Be My Detonator"
(#) MillaE 2012-02-11
ARE YOU MESSEFUCKIN' SERIOUS? I just lost grip of the cliff. Jamie's going to kill them. I'll bet she'll kill Mikes to. Poor munchkins. PLEASE WRITE MOOOOORE.
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