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• Give me a storyline..

  (#) CatscanFlyy 2012-02-13

  Okay so I may regret giving you this idea when I run out of inspiration later on but whatever I have too much work to get on top of anyway and it might be shit BUT basically for a whiel I've had an idea for a fiction based of an anime I watched called Le Potrait de Petite Cossette and it could work with any pairing but proaberly staring Gee
  
  An art student starts work in an old second hand/vintage/ fine art store and he discovers a portrait that seems to more he becomes obessed with the portrait and one night mamnages to contact the ghost caught whithin it the ghost says that for them to be free someoen must pay for their murderers sins physically and mentally
  
  The rest is a love story in which the art student agrees and is tortured and the ghost falls in love with them because of this and well the anime is more complicated but as a storyline I think it's pretty cool and different so you're welcome to use it if you like
  
  C:

  Author's response

  That's quite interesting. I'll think about it.;)

• Give me a storyline..

  (#) missfunghoul57 2012-02-13

  Okay, well I'm not very good at this kinda thing....but I do have an idea that you can use if you want to.
  
  Nothing ever goes wrong in the small, quiet town of Shady Brook. Everyone pays their taxes, cleans up after their dogs, and leaves their radios at a normal level. The students in the local high school are just as average. They do their homework, ace every test and are never a minute late. And unlike most public high schoolers, everyone minded their own business.....well almost everyone. Eva Beck is a gifted student, who is filled with wit and creativity and for the most part, sticks to the status quo. But when a mysterious group of boys move into town and strange things start happening, Eva can't help but start to wonder what's going on. After recruiting the help of her best friend, she sets out to find the explanation for all of these odd happenings. What Eva doesn't know is that she is the center of all of this madness, and whoever or whatever is behind everything.....just wants her. (it's kinda like a present day little red riding hood type thing, but with some twists)
  
  If you like it, let me know and I can get you more info! I'll try and think of some other things....Xo

  Author's response

  I like the idea, but what kind of things happen? Explain a bit more. I'm interested.

• Give me a storyline..

  (#) missfunghoul57 2012-02-14

  Glad you like it! Well at first, small things take place....like broken windows, smashed car headlights and ruined flower beds. What seems like petty crimes to ordinary people, are the equivalent to murder for the people of Shady Brook. In the midst of all of these some what small crimes, Eva starts to take notice to the new boys in school. After realizing that one of them is in her chem class, Eva makes an attempt to approach him despite her friends constant pleads not to. Eva and this mystery boy are assigned to team up for a chemistry project. Although it only lasted 2 days, the new boy learned a lot about Eva, including her locker number...254. After that experiment, the two talked a few more times, but never enough to have a relationship. Beautifully hand written notes start appearing in Eva's locker...one every single day. Every one of them was signed with a single letter. She couldn't figure out who the letters were coming from, but day by day, she felt more and more affection towards that new boy, who her friends had convinced her to stay away from. It was like a case of forbidden love. Suddenly, stranger and larger crimes start happening. Farmer's cattle and sheep disappeared without a trace, and the town's mayor goes missing. The crimes continue, and after a few weeks, Eva can't help herself anymore. Between the attraction to the new boy and the sudden connection she feels to the current events....she recruits her closest friend and begins to investigate. Just when it seems like she is close to solving the town's mystery...the mayor's lifeless body if found in the town square along with three numbers written in blood. 254. At first, Eva doesn't realize the connection...until she shows up to school the next day, and finds the number on her locker circled with red marker. She receives another note that explained that whoever was writing them knew Eva was investigating. This note was pleading, almost threatening. Whoever was writing them, said they wanted to meet, her.....they needed to. Immediately, a single thought flashed across Eva's mind. "What if I don't want to meet?" Her question was answered in the next line. "I have your best friend." Now everything was falling into place for the mystery boy behind this plot....he would finally get to be with his true soul mate, and he couldn't wait. Whether she knew it or not, Eva couldn't wait to be with him either. But first, she had to set out on one final investigation.....
  
  So yeah...that's basically what I've got so far. Lemma know what you think and if you need anything else! Xo

• Give me a storyline..

  (#) missfunghoul57 2012-02-14

  Just realized, that last review was pretty shitty. I actually think the story might be cooler if Eva was almost afraid of the new boys, yet she couldn't help but feel a pull towards them. She wasn't in contact with any of them...accept for the strange letters in her locker. As the weeks go by, and the crimes escalate from broken windows, to graffiti, to murder...Eva begins involve herself with the investigation. Her attraction to these mysterious guys, one in particular, seems to make her more vulnerable and more willing to risk everything to solve this mystery...even if it means sneaking around town in the dead of the night (which is frowned upon by the people of Shady Brook).
  
  There....I like that a little better.
  
  Some of the "crimes" obviously start small and grow larger over the course of 3 weeks:
  -Extremely loud music, 'odd' style of dress, smoking (I know this isn't a crime, but it isn't ordinary for the townspeople)
  - broken windows
  - ruined flower beds
  - smashed headlights
  - beatings/stabbings
  - missing mayor
  - mayor's body
  -anything else "crime like"
  
  all of these events take place at night, and no one can ever seem to catch whoever is doing this...
  
  I'm sorry if this really sucks or if it's confusing in any way....or even if I ramble..like I'm doing now. You can do whatever you whatever you want with the story, I just ask that if you take the idea and run with it...you keep the main character's name and personality the same :D
  

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