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Dawn of Time
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-06-27
Good Idea, But you need longer chapters. All of your chapters so far are like one or even half of one. But none the less it is a very good Idea and probably a good plot.Dawn of Time
(#) Arisey 2006-06-28
Erm, Narcissia! Everything, what? You can't have the power of everything. By the way, use quotation marks("") when a character speaks. Your chapters should be longer, and the plot needs some work. Fairies? It seems like a good idea, but it needs some work.
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