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The Third Failure!!!
8 reviewsCronus fails to take over the city again, and after this, Archie is kissed by Atlanta again.
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The Third Failure!!!
(#) eros_cupid 2006-06-28
Terrance is a new member, who is descendant of Triptolemus.The Third Failure!!!
(#) Arisey 2006-06-29
Erm....all there is there is the members talking, and the talking isn't even right. "" is what you use for talking not Archie:Blah Blah Blah. Plus, you didn't even explain how your new character got there, you just threw him in, expecting all of us to understand who he is.Author's response
Eh.... sorry about what I did, dudette.The Third Failure!!!
(#) princessofoyownworld 2006-07-03
I know that I have already reviewed this but, and I dont mean to sound harsh, there is such a thing as DESCRIPTION! You story is written like a play, with lines and sage directions. And you do not tell us that you mean for it to sound like that so use DESCRIPTION!Author's response
Oopsy, sorry about the mistake.The Third Failure!!!
(#) dancechickie222 2006-08-22
i dont like these stories of yours because youre not a writer. youre just throwing a bunch of words together and trying to put something on this page.Author's response
Get off my back! Listen, I've got a bunch of friends and they like me stories. Now, get lost!The Third Failure!!!
(#) greektitan 2006-10-23
Its like fighto mania down here,well thats the longest story i read by you and its very good!I like it,please update!Author's response
Thank u very much
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