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You Said Goodbye Before you Said Hello
3 reviewsFirst story! Frikey! You made your choice. Why would I take you back? Because I love you.
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You Said Goodbye Before you Said Hello
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-03-07
I loved the plot! This was a great first story. I love Frikeys. You're a great writer and I hope you post more stuff soon!
OXOAuthor's response
Thank you! That means so much to me. You are one of my favourite writers and I love that you think it was good! I wouldn't say I'm a great writer but I might write some more stories. Thank you for reviewing!! :)You Said Goodbye Before you Said Hello
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-03-13
I think that this is really, really clever and extremely atmosphereic, especially the ending. It may be short, but I think that just adds to the powerful impact and overall effect of the story. Fantastic job and I sincerely hope that you write more like this.
Well done! :DAuthor's response
Thank you so much!!! You're so nice. I was trying to extend it a bit but I'm glad you think the length was fine. I've been thinking of more one shots and hopefully have one up soon. Thank you for reviewing!You Said Goodbye Before you Said Hello
(#) killjoy_blackrose 2012-04-23
man this is really good...almost brought a tear to my eye there. keep them stories a-coming, lad.
peace, kAuthor's response
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I hope it wasn't good sad. Thanks for reviewing! I shall have a chapter up tonight :)
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