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Translations of Blood
(#) MySuicideInSilence 2012-03-25
I find this very beautiful.
I hope you'll keep writing.Author's response
Thank you (: I've updated now...thanks for reviewing!Translations of Blood
(#) PurplePoison 2012-03-26
I have many things to say.. but they can all be summarized in three words: You're a genius!
I really love how your wide your imagination is, and I like the new style! Keep on going, Queen.Author's response
Awww, thank you! :'D That's such a big compliment...thanks for taking the time to review :D
CosmicZombie xoTranslations of Blood
(#) MCR_ROCK_RHCP 2012-03-26
More please. I love this. XAuthor's response
I've updated now :) Thank you!Translations of Blood
(#) Down-a-Rabbit-Hole 2012-03-26
First of all- Ive been a massive fan of your writing for aaaages. "Trying to escape the inevitable" is like my fav fanatic ever.
And though I like where this story is going, would you mind if I gave you a hint of advice??? You're aptitude for vivid imagery is incredible, but sometimes I notice that you've used the same word too many times in too short of a space. In this chapter I found the words "ruby," "scarlet" and "bedraggled" popped up a few times each which gave the text a repetitive nature. I've also noticed this in some of your other writings, and felt like I should mention my thoughts. I hope you don't mind me pointing out a flaw, I just know that I appreciate constructive criticism and hope you do too.
But otherwise - gosh, you really have a gift. The amount of thought and effort you put into your work is evident in every line. I'm constantly hanging out for more. Keep up the fabulous work!Author's response
Thank you so much, I'm so happy you like my work! And I really appreciate constructive criticism (If it really IS constructive- like yours is!), thanks for the advice, I'll keep that in mind for future chapters/stories, and will go back and edit this one in the next couple of days probably.
Again, thank you so much...this review made my day :)
Thanks for taking the time to review!
CosmicZombie xoTranslations of Blood
(#) jessloui 2012-03-27
You have a really amazing writing style. It's very dramatic and gripping and I can't wait to read more.Author's response
Thank you so much! I'll be updating on Thursday, hopefully (:Translations of Blood
(#) jessloui 2012-03-28
Just got so pumped to see a notification for an update in my inbox, before I realised that it's just Ficwad playing tricks on me as it likes to do, sending me an email even though there's no new chapter. DAMN YOU FICWAD!Author's response
Sorry, I just had to edit a couple things- update will hopefully be up tomorrow or Friday (:Translations of Blood
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-03-30
WHOA.
Fantastic opening chapter. The writing was absolutely amazing, the way you manage to install suspense into every line was just awesome. In fact, I think this is your best chapter writing wise so far. I cannot WAIT to read on as weirdly it seems morbid suits you just as much as happy, laughable fluff!
Update soon.
SFAuthor's response
Ahhh, your review actually made my day, THANK YOU! I'm so glad you thought it was good...It's not my usual kinda thing, but I actually really enjoyed writing it! Thanks so much for taking the time to review :D
CosmicZombie xo
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