Categories > Original > Poetry
(#) AdnarimSmada 2012-04-01I don't know what to say to this hon. I can tell you probably don't want sympathy though. I'll just let you know that it certainly wasn't shit and you shouldn't tell yourself that. It was masterful because it was backed by real emotion that can't be edited and if that's how you're feeling, you shouldn't have to be afraid to show it, know what I mean? Then again, that was the point of this poem. It was beautiful and I felt that I must review.
Author's responseJust...thank you.
actuallyy the fact you read this is awesome, I love all ur work. Just gonna say that.
And thanks, just...thanks. You made me smile so big :)
(#) xxburymexx 2012-04-02; u; This isn't shit, so don't even worry about that. Adnarim Smada pretty much said everything I wanted to say... Sometimes the best work can't be edited, because it comes from your heart and not your mind. If that makes sense. I mean, it does come from your mind but more from your heart, therefore editing is not needed... Yeah.
This is beautiful, okay? c':
Author's responseThank you, so much. I totally get what you said, wasn't really confusing, so that's good. Thank you, though, for liking this, I honestly thought this was horrible and that everyone would think I was like, whining or some shit. That's what usually happens everywhere else (RL).
(#) Zombiekickass 2012-04-02You honey, are amazing. The poem was beautifully writen.
I will say one thing though. and that is you should never, and i mean never feel weak for crying, or even think it makes you weak, You cry weither you are happy or sad. It's a beautiful emotion that you should never have to feel guilty about. I hope one day you find the coruge to show that emotion
Love you lots baby girl
Author's responseThank you
And I know I shouldn't, but, ya know, it just is.
(#) nadifangirl 2019-12-26Gah my thing went weird, sorry! What I meant to say was This is nowhere near s*. This is amazing and beautiful and awe-inspiring. There have been poets who create lines that pop out all over the place and overall don’t create good work, but this? This is ART. This is a masterpiece. This is just...wow.
Author's responseoh wow, hi, thank you for enjoying this in the year of our lord 2019. this exists mostly as an archive and i spend a lot of time being ashamed of the work here, so thank you sm for this positivity burst
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