(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-04-12When I checked my email and saw that you had posted numerous things today, I flipped. There's nothing more entertaining than reading excellent fanfic when you're home sick. This was definitely excellent, as is eerything that you write. I really liked how you had Mikey use "tummy" when he was talking to Gerard about cutting himself. It let a layer of innocence shine through the outer skin of depressed teenager. I always feel like crying whenever Mikey dies in a story. Loved this!
Author's responseAw, thanks! I'm very pleased that my writing entertains you! I hope you get better soon.
I'm glad you picked up on the use of the word "tummy", it was my little attempt at showing the reader that Mikey really is just a child in this.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-04-12Wow! I think you did an amazing job on this. I really loved how Gerard was so loving and caring and how Mikey seemed to change from being innocent and sweet to being almost... I don't know, sort of evil(?) No not evil actually. Just sort of the opposite to being innocent and cute if you get me??? I'll stop blabbing. I really enjoyed reading this. I think it really captured the mind of a depressed teenager and a worried brother. I also think Gerard is really loyal to Mikey. The fact that he didn't tell their parents that Mikey has been cutting himself. It shows the strong caring relationship between them and it jerked a tear or two as I read the ending. Absolutely brilliant!!!
Author's responseThank you very much!
Gerard was consistently caring towards Mikey, but as life went on Mikey changed because of what the changes in his life did to him. I get what you mean; Mikey didn't go evil, he just got worn down and beaten in too many times, thus ruining his innocent cuteness. Gerard is definitely loyal to Mikey, but perhaps is it was that loyalty preventing him from telling his parents that was ultimately Mikey's downfall?
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice and detailed review! :D
(#) snake56tongue 2012-04-14This is so beautifully emotional.
Seriously. It is just what I needed, so thank you. And it's not cliche or dull, AT ALL.
It is incredible :)
Sorry, you must find my reviews quite dreary considering I always say the same things, but it is cause I love your stories so much.
I felt as if I was feeling Gerard's pain, y'know?
Thank you for writing this :D
Author's responseThank you very much! :D
I'm extremely pleased that you feel this is what you need. And I'm super relieved that you don't think it's dull/cliched.
Please don't apologize; I adore your reviews more than words can even start to say!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :D
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