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F is for Frank, Who Was Stabbed in the Eye
10 reviews"Well, Frank," he said softly, and I could see the gleam of his teeth. He was [/smiling/], the sick fuck. "Having fun?"
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The Greatest Show Unearthed
(#) Frankies_Hands 2012-03-25
I'm already on the edge of my seat. :3 Not a waste of time, at all. Frank cannot help the fact that he had the urge to help a fellow dog lover, mistake was made, and now he's blind. This is not the first of your stories I have read so I know this will have a nice little plot twist in there I didn't see coming.
Anywhovillepenis,
I cannot wait until you update this marvelous peice work..
-xoxoL
cough cough
[I found you bio very amusing. Stalker-ish? :/ ]Author's response
-Sniffle- Your review touches me. I'm getting all emotional.
Thank you so much! A cookie for you, my friend! And yes, there's a MASSIVE twist ahead. So hold onto your ass, because the seat you're sitting on might not be able to take it.
... Wow, Benjamin. Nice modesty.
Whatever! I'm fabulous! -Slo mo hair flip-
And nice to see someone read the bio. ^^ My friends gave me the strangest of looks...
- BenThe Greatest Show Unearthed
(#) mom2masonandcole 2012-03-26
Need more now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's response
Then at dawn, I WRITE!
To the Ben-Mobile! AWAAAAY!
- BenThe Greatest Show Unearthed
(#) ChasingPavementsxoxo 2012-03-26
UPDATE PLEASE?????
and I, too, found your bio to be pretty frikin awesome. And then i realized you sound like one of my friends, lol :3\
UPDATE SOON NOW PLEASE ????
xxIzzyAuthor's response
The bio appears to be a winner. I shall name it Bio, and it shall be mine. It shall be my Bio.
And your friend sounds fudgin' awesome! Freaks of the world, UNITE!
- BenThe Greatest Show Unearthed
(#) Mikeys_Glasses 2012-03-27
Woah- this seems fucking cool already!Poor Frankie... Eh, whatever. Gerard has to show him who's boss, right?
Or is it just me who loves all stories with physco/dominant/possessive/masochistic/dark/promiscuous Gerard? Yeah, I thought so, too.
It would be cool to put some Pete Wentz and Moikoi Way in there, if there's a way (heh heh) to incorporate it. :3 And I love biting and all- but I'm more of a hair-pulled, if I do say so myself.Author's response
You think it's cool now? Wait until I throw the twist. Shit's gonna fly. Unicorns will be left on deserted islands with talking penguins. Chuck Norris will be so astounded that he'll lose a fight against Dumbledore.
And physco/dominant/possessive/masochistic/dark/promiscuous Gerard is da bomb! I'm such a perv when it comes to dark stories. o.o
Pete and Moikoi? Will do! All night... Giggity. And I see what you did there.
For me it's a little tongue, a little teeth. Can't go wrong with a little vampire play. -wiggles eyebrows-
- BenThe Greatest Show Unearthed
(#) -TheGhostOfYou- 2012-03-27
Okay, when I saw the title I was automatically attracted to this story since Creature Feature is one of my favorite bands. It makes it even better seeing as I always love the Psychotic-Gerard stories, since I tend to write a lot of them. Anyways, it seems pretty awesome. I can't wait for more! xAuthor's response
Well slap my face and call me bitch! You really like it?! I just finished Doll House last night and I'm like: "This person must be respected!!! Nathan, call the press! Pure fuckin' gold!" And now you're reviewing, and my brain just can't comprehend the amazement that just plowed into me.
Anyway, THANK YOU for reviewing! And Creature Feature is completely epic. Marilyn Manson, eat your grimy little heart out! (You know... If you actually have one... That guy's just creepy).
- BenThe Greatest Show Unearthed
(#) jessloui 2012-03-27
This story is going to be f*cking awesome. I can already tell. I can't wait to see what happens...so pleeeeeeease don't take to long to update. Also, can you bring Gabe Saporta in somehow, I love him.Author's response
Ooooh, Gabe Saporta. I'm all a-twitter. Yes, I shall add him.
Update... Update... Sounds familiar... Oh! You mean the second chapter that just so happens to be taking up space on my hard-drive? -evil laugh- Soon. Very soon.
- BenThe Greatest Show Unearthed
(#) imjustagirlnotahero 2012-03-31
Holy fecking way man! This shit's awesome! I love the fics like these where someone in the band gets kidnapped and then they fall of each other, or some random plot twist. I adore it.
I have to say, I was freaking out on the other side of the computer screen at the end. The whole knife in the eye thing. But I think this story is amazing nontheless.
Can't wait for your next upload! And I have to agree with jessloui. BRING IN GABE SAPORTA! And put him with Mikey Way. Because that will cause the universe to explode into happiness and I with be totally fine with that.
~AmberAuthor's response
Well, now I have a problem. Mikey appears to be stuck between two equally hot men (heh).
What shall I do? I must ponder.
- BenThe Greatest Show Unearthed
(#) grotesk_burlesk 2012-04-02
I really enjoyed this, it's quite original! You've got real talent, this is fantastic! Honestly!
Ah, poor Frank. His love for dogs will be the death of him one of these days! Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter and discovering where this goes, I'm sure it's going to be amazing!
-Caitlinxo
P.S- I also giggled at your bio:3Author's response
Ah, the bio. Gotta love that bio.
And you guys... I'm grinning like an idiot thinking: 'they have no idea what's going on, do they?'
Hehe. Soon.
- BenThe Greatest Show Unearthed
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-04-13
This is fantastic.
I love the detail of his emotion, the fear he's feeling. It really is well written.The Greatest Show Unearthed
(#) Kaida_R 2012-05-09
I agree, dark sadistic Gerard is the BEST!!! Your writing is incredible! I was immediately drawn in and captivated!
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