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Just another high school frerard
4 reviewsThe title is the summary also it's in franks point of view
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Just another high school frerard
(#) Abicus 2012-04-14
Hey there! I've just been reading some of your stories on here, and whilst the ideas of them are really good, I was thinking that the actual text could maybe be improved a little? I'm not trying to be mean, but I sort of have no idea what's going on. If you could space the paragraphs out a little, and start a new line when someone is talking, then that would make it a lot easier to read! :)
Like I said, I don't want to come across as mean, just trying to give constructive criticism!
xoAbbyJust another high school frerard
(#) GeorgiaMCRlover 2012-04-15
Good story line but a little confusing.
Sorry xoJust another high school frerard
(#) GeorgiaMCRlover 2012-04-15
Good story line but a little confusing.
Sorry xoJust another high school frerard
(#) Killjoyforever123 2012-04-15
Ok im fixing the story a little Brendan Kelly is a jock in my class who makes fun me and calls me a faggot so hope you guys think chapter two is better!
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