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Playing with power
(#) paradoxicalcynic 2012-04-17
Loving this story so so much!!
You are such an amazing writer - and I'm unbelievably greatful that you've taken time out of your uni life to write this! :)
I'm looking forward to the update muchly :D
Certainly wondering whether Mikey will anger Gerard enough for Gerard to kick his ass - wouldn't that be epic!
Ah, there is so much possiblity in the future of this story. Can't wait!!!Playing with power
(#) aweirdtree 2012-04-17
yayy :D thank you for this chapter! you write so well... dammit, woman, i could read you stories all day and not get bored XD (no, seriously)
but... how can you make Frank rip the fucking books? D: sorry but... gaah! i could never be that angry... then again, Frank doesn't appreciate books the same way i do. still!
lol. thanks for this anyway, and update when you have time!Playing with power
(#) AdnarimSmada 2012-04-17
That is messed up.
All of that. This whole story actually.
I got my peace out though with my last review, and don't get me wrong I still feel that way but there's no point in repeating it all.
Frank is just an idiot. This is definitely a case where repeated ignorance is not bliss. Truth be told, with his situation, I think he's passed ignorance. Now he's engaging in what would be termed textbook stupidity. He can't see the vicious cycle going on here and Gerard, he's just sadistic and delusional.
-Adnarim Smada
Author's response
I'm sorry to hear the story is still creeping you out so much :')
Hopefully you read my response to your last review, and my position still stands of course. I think it's important to remember here this is just a piece of a fiction, everything these characters do, think or feel is entirely my own creation. I wouldn't say Frank is being "textbook stupid" which I'm pretty sure is not the technical term for it xD If we're gonna get technical I'd say Frank's falling into some textbook stockholm syndrome. Gerard's actually the kindest person he's been 'owned' by and so if he didn't start to feel some gratefulness for that and some positivety towards Gerard then he'd actually be pretty strange. He's been in captivity since he was fourteen, it's important to remember in this entire thing that Frank's psychological state is going to be pretty delicate and very suggestable. And Gerard isn't really the sick character in this if you ask me...
Anyway, that's just my view on it. But what would I know, I'm just the author :')
xoPlaying with power
(#) KilljoyLlamaLove 2012-04-18
I love how long your chapters are! I can't stand the stories with 700 words 7000 is much better :P
I feel as though I could jump right into this story, it seems so real!
if my friends liked MCR I'd show them this fic.. actually I still might :D
promise me you will NEVER stop writing?? pleeeeaseeee? maybe even publish something later on in life??? ahhhhhhhhhhhh then I would buy 568124795623 copies ^_^
anyway, thank you for being the best.Author's response
Haha thank you xD I'm really glad you're enjoying it :D And if you wanted to share it around that'd be awesome xD
I don't intend to ever stop writing :') And I have actually been sending manuscripts of original stories of mine to publishers and have been getting some pretty positive feedback from a handful, the problem is I wanna go traditional publishing so its real hard to get a break with that, but if anything does happen I'll be sure to let everyone know :')
xoPlaying with power
(#) andreajp 2012-04-21
Goddamn it Rachel! This is EXACTLY why I didn't want to read this until it was done because the groan I just made shook the whole goddamn house!
The last time I threw a temper tantrum I did the same thing with the shampoo bottles, I took all the shower gel, mouse, hair gel, nail polish, anything liquidy really, and poured it onto the bathroom rug, it felt good and yet retarded at the same time. Like a mixture of "HA! I made a mess!" with "HA! You can't was your hair until you buy more! Nan nan na boo boo sucks to be yoooooooou!"
I want to string Mikey up from his neck. He needs to get his own goddamn pet and do with them what he pleases and calm his tits with the whole Frank thing. I have visions of Mikey pushing Gerard's buttons a little to much and Gee taking a machete to his neck....."You think I'm soft now Mikey?! Do you?!!".......okay, maybe a little less gay than that, but you get the idea.
Fuck me I want more.
GODDAMN YOU RACHEL AND YOUR GIFT OF WRITING!!!!!!!!Author's response
Hahahaha Andrea I love you so much XD I have never done the pouring of toiletries onto the floor thing, but God I can imagine it would be so much fun xD
I think if Gee did take a machete to Mikey's neck then it would be very VERY gay. Gerard is a queen. I don't care if he's in the mafia, he's still a queen.
Fear not, more shall be given!
... Eventually :')
xoPlaying with power
(#) MCRnum1fan97 2012-04-25
Oh my gerard! I cant wait for your next update as always your chapters and stories are supremly epic and I love this one just as much, you are nothing less of a phenomenal author. please give us news on jamima in the next update. I need to know is she ok, and one last thing. WOW. Do not get in Franks arm reach when you piss him off and I'm relived to know that he still has his will power. whopwhop! for Frankie
and fuck you mikey you suck.
HOLLY FUCK! DX I never thought I would EVER say that, when things happen that cause me to write things like that makes me thank fuck that it's only fiction beause i love real mikey.
well I'm done ranting and cant wait for you to update, like many other I'll be here every day. XDAuthor's response
Haha thank you XD I'm glad you're enjoying it :') I'll try to get some news in on Jamia if I can ;) And of course we all love Mikey for real, he's a total sweetheart :3
xoPlaying with power
(#) XxJynxx 2012-04-27
love this chapter! Excellent work!Author's response
Haha thanks :D
xoPlaying with power
(#) OhmyGee 2012-07-16
I like the story I just seriously hate how gerard thinks frank deserved it (while in conversation with mikey) nobody ever deserves to be rape...but I do hate and Love mikeys character!
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