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• Under City Lights

  (#) ReddyDevil 2012-04-22

  Jon Jon Jon Jon JON! XD Haha, I was waiting for him to come in!!! Now all we need is more Spencer...
  
  And Brendon = biggest asshole ever. Seriously. I wanted to slap the cocky smirk i imagined off his face. And like I said before, he's gonna get clobbered.
  
  And seriously, when Ryan was panicking? Brendon needed to turn around and say to him, "Stop panicking!" XD
  
  AND YES, RANDOM BRITISH EXCHANGE STUDENTS CALLED CHARLIE AND ALEX AND OMAR AND DAN!!! I could totally see it happening.
  
  And with that kissing Ryan thing? Yeah, I have a friend who agrees with you a HELL of a lot...
  
  Waiting for the next update for more Jon.

  Author's response

  Yep, I was excited to write him in! :D There will definitely be a LOT more Jon in the next chapter. There's not a huge amount of Spencer in this but he does come in later. (I also still have my other Spencer story which I've been editing a lot since I want it to be a decent story but I'm not posting it until I finish 'What Is Love?' so I'm hoping you find that at least somewhat interesting...)
  
  Yes! I seem to love to hate him in a lot of my stories.
  Ryan panics a lot in this, haha. i just see him as the mature/yet panicky one for some reason.
  
  Mmm, it's so tempting. :D
  
  Hahaha. I'm glad I'm not alone on that.
  
  I'll try to get it out soon but I've got a few other different updates I'd like to work on tonight, plus I'd like to review 'Phantoms' but since I am lacking a life at the moment... who knows what I could get done?

• Under City Lights

  (#) ReddyDevil 2012-04-22

  Oh, and by the way (this isnt me being a bitch and telling you to hurry up, this is eager and excited me) I'm still waiting for your review for Phantoms! I know you're probably busy, but ever since you mentioned you were going to read it, I've been sooooo excited to see what you think of it, because it's one of my favorite things I've ever written! (And your my favourite reviewer; another perfect match, eh? ;D) Just to let you know, I'll probably squeal when I do get it. XD But yeah, no hurry. You've got a life; I respect that.

  Author's response

  Oh my! I'm soooo glad that you reminded me. X.x I bookmarked it so that I wouldn't forget about it since I have a list of 'Ficwad' things to do... and I forgot! I knew I was wanting to do something but each time I went to your page I got distracted by 'I May Be Blind'...
  Ahhh, definitely try to do that tonight!
  
  Thank you. :D

• Under City Lights

  (#) GAClive 2012-04-22

  uuuuuugh I hate going out on dates, guys just get extra stupid on them. And if she gets drunk, bad stuff will happen to Brendon when he finds her (and I know he'll beat Ryan there), I just know it!

  Author's response

  They really do and it's just never right. Though, a date every now and then would be nice. I haven't gone on a date in like... two years.
  Bad stuff, check.
  Haha.

• Under City Lights

  (#) GAClive 2012-04-22

  Hehe, it's actually been almost two years for me as well (two at late june).... not that I'm counting. >.> One of my last dates was seriously "Ready to go? So...What do you want to do?" "You didn't have anything planned?" "Well, I wanted to ask what you wanted to do!" "No plan on our first date...you had a lot of chances to ask me" "Well I'm asking now! So, what do you want to do?" And only creeps and pervs have asked me out since then.
  
  Maybe that's why I love your stories, I don't feel so alone when I read them! "Hey! This character's love life sucks too!"

  Author's response

  X.x I've had one like that. We ended up... hanging out at his place. Then he tried to kiss me. Uh, no. I felt like I was hanging out with a casual friend. No kissing there.
  Yeah, when I worked at Taco Bell I had perverts hit on me constantly. It got old. Especially when they were drunk perverts.
  
  Haha, good to hear! A lot of the shit I throw in has really happened, or is a close example of something that has happened to me or someone that I know... So it's all fairly realistic, or I try to make it so. For some reason I can't seem to settle on fairy tale romance types. There has to be conflict because... Well, I've always had conflict.
  Glad you don't feel alone though. :D You shouldn't. Story-book romances are overrated and inaccurate generally.

• Under City Lights

  (#) GAClive 2012-04-23

  I've pretty much decided to get a fake wedding ring so this summer at my work people will stop flirting with me and calling me "sweet cheeks" when I ask them not to touch the artwork again. (I'm a security guard every summer) And I'll probably start wearing it at school as well, which may make it harder to meet guys but I'm getting so frustrated with all the creeps.
  
  Yeah, you gotta write what you know about in order to write well.

  Author's response

  Ugh, unfortunately (or so I've found) that doesn't really work too well. If you do you must tell me how it turns out!
  Ugh, I would get pissed at 'sweet cheeks.' I'm usually called sweetheart, honey, sexy, etc but never sweet cheeks.
  That sounds really awesome. Do you enjoy it?
  I completely understand. Maybe one of your friends can set you up with a decent guy, if you're even in to dating right now? That usually turns out less creeps at least. Well... sometimes. One of my friends set me up with a supposed 'psychic' once. I'll never forget that date. X.x
  
  

• Under City Lights

  (#) GAClive 2012-04-24

  Yeah, it could go really well or really horribly. I might still get flirted with and then with the REAL creeps. And it is a fun job, I love it a lot.
  
  Maybe, a lot of my friends are guys so it would be hilariously awkward if I went up to one, "Hey Fred, I want to date can you set me up?" And I keep meeting the kind of guy that I like, but they're either taken or not interested (either because they're busy or just not noticing me). I don't even know if I have time for a relationship, I work and I have school. But still I waaaant ooooone whines

  Author's response

  I'd do it! Guys are actually a lot better than girls at setting dates up, or so I've found.
  Thankfully I shouldn't have to worry about flirting too much. My new job requires me to wear a clean suit most of the time.
  
  Aww, enjoy being single!
  I'm actually in a committed relationship. We just don't go out on dates anymore. He hates going out and loves staying in, where I'm the opposite.
  It's so weird because when we got together he used to be such a hard partying. So, I guess I'm grateful that he found being with me better than partying and doing drugs. I mean, love partying... hate drugs. X.x
  Totally not going down that road ever again.

• Under City Lights

  (#) GAClive 2012-04-24

  Yeah but knowing my guy friends their reaction would be, "WHAT?! NO. Three of the girls in the group already have boyfriends and we have reached our max quota. We cannot handle looking out for one more person we are running out of shotguns to threaten the guys with!" Also, they kinda have friends I'm not at all interested in. =/ And my guy friends are way too sneaky to be trusted.
  
  I am kinda enjoying it but it's the close calls and getting led on that is starting to wear on me.
  
  Ew, I despise drugs. And it seems that most guys around my age use them. That's cool that he doesn't use. =)
  
  I'm so not a partier, it's kinda sad. I am the stereotypical nerdy "good-girl" who thinks a party is having a sleepover to watch nerdy movies with the girls (that was my break-up party). Which both types of parties are awesome, I just get uber awkward and grumpy at big wild parties and I don't get drunk easily and when I do loosen up it's my nerdy tongue. "I'm sorry, but Wonderwoman does NOT have a cape! But you do handle heels really well for a dude"

  Author's response

  Hahaha. Maybe it's best not to get set up by them then lol. According to my boyfriend I'm not going to be able to find anyone other than him ever because he's the only one that can take my accident prone issues. Like five minutes ago. I fell, he tried to help me up... I accidentally elbowed him in the neck. I'm pretty much accidentally abusive.
  
  Same here! Ugh, most everyone. Plus, I just moved to Oregon and I knew people here before... Now I swear they are all in to Meth. =/ It's horrifying.
  I couldn't stand dating a druggie honestly. :D I'm not that awesomely understanding.
  
  Awww. Hey, that is a type of party! I enjoy those every now and then. :D
  Hahahaha. That pretty much had me cracking up.
  Do you turn 21 this year or did you just recently turn 20?
  Next month I turn 21.

• Under City Lights

  (#) GAClive 2012-04-24

  Oh, and my uniform isn't exactly sexy either. Khaki pants and white blouse shudders

  Author's response

  Haha, evidently you pull it off enough to get hit on. Poor thing. =/ If someone hits on me while I'm in a clean suit... My goodness.
  End of the world.

• Under City Lights

  (#) GAClive 2012-04-24

  Oh my goodness my ex and I were both like that. He accidently knocked me over and then when he went to help me up he tripped and fell on top of me and then I started to get up and hit my head against his. Oh boy. My mom saw it happen and she said, "I swear, you two will die before this even gets serious." I hope his neck gets better.
  
  =( I have zero tolerance, I was related to one and there's no way in hell I'll date one.
  
  Yeah he was a pretty decent wonderwoman.
  
  Turned 20 a couple months ago. I usually only drink with my sister (who is waaaay older and got sick of waiting for me to turn 21) so she is one of the only people to see me drunk. THANK GOD. I never want to get drunk in public UGH that'd just be horrible.
  
  Happy almost birthday!!
  
  Hehehe, maybe guys secretly like ugly uniforms?
  
  One time it seriously went like this, "Hey can you break me over at the delivery post?" "Sure, I'll be right there" I show up to break him and there's someone there delivering food. I relieve the other guard and as soon as he's gone the delivery guy said, "I told him to go on break so I could talk to the pretty security guard." -__- And he was at least 12 years older than me. He could tell I wasn't amused and said he was joking but it was too late. At that job I either get jokes about being a kid or stupid attempts at flirting. So, I figured if I wore a wedding ring people might think I'm older and leave me alone. Worth a shot at least.

  Author's response

  Haha, at least your mom didn't freak out about it. My boyfriends mom saw us play wrestling (Which is way different but still) and I slammed him against the wall yet she still tried to tell him he was being too rough with me. Poor guy just couldn't win.
  
  My boyfriend is already 21 and so are most of my friends. Kind of takes the thrill out of turning 21 when you already drink. X.x So, it won't be a huge deal. I will be going to bars though, most likely.
  Thanks! :D
  
  That... could be. I mean, serious fetish being those maid costume things? Those are fugly.
  
  Ugh. That wouldn't be a bad idea actually, especially if people play the age card with you.
  I hate that.
  I've always had older co-workers and they always treat me like I'm a little kid, until I freaking have a massive brain blow up in which I spout every intelligent sounding thing I can think of their way. Then they just look confused.

• Under City Lights

  (#) GAClive 2012-04-25

  "Why yes, I do know words longer than three syllables"

  Author's response

  That's right when confusion strikes their faces. Oh god, young people can learn!

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