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Under City Lights
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-04-26
No, it's not dragged out at all. I find if it's not dragged out or written with them knowing each other first, the romance between whoever it is doesn't feel real to me. I prefer dragged out to fast paced goings. But, actually, this doesn't feel dragged out at all. :)
And once again, return of Brendon the Ass. I swear, that made him sound like a superhero or something. XP Seriously, it will be interesting to see how much his character will grow and develop over the course of this story. :D
Extremely excited to read the next installment. Especially because I wanna know what Jon does when she doesn't call him... 0.0 Maybe Omar should be hired as a bodyguard. He looks pretty strong, and he's big (I don't mean that offensively), so people will be reluctant to mess with him. But to me, he just looks like someone who'd be good at giving cuddles! XD Cuddles with Omar Abidi, FTW! Anyone wanna join in?Author's response
I'm glad. :) Thank you. Sometimes I just can't tell if I'm actually going somewhere or dragging it out. I always start out loving something and then tend to struggle... because I feel it should already be at the point that I'm writing and it's not. But when it's too fast, I just can't post it. And if I do then I feel like a romantic failure. (Which I sort of am.)
Haha, Brendon The Ass. That's gonna stick, I'm pretty sure.
Super sucky superhero! That flows...
Cuddling with big guys is always fun! I'll join. :PUnder City Lights
(#) GAClive 2012-04-26
BRENDON stop digging yourself deeper into a hole you won't be able to climb out of!!! For cryin' out loud!
ReddyDevil, I like that nickname: Brendon the Ass. I might start calling him that now. =)
I liked the chapter and the conversation she had with her dad, it was really sweet.Author's response
:P I like the nickname too. She's quite genius when it comes to Panic! members.
Thank you. :D I'm glad. I made her parents the ultimate 'cool' parents, though still caring of their daughter.Under City Lights
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-04-26
Brendon The Ass and Confucius Ryan... I think I'm in a role here! XDUnder City Lights
(#) ReddyDevil 2012-04-27
I feel like such a loser... I only just replied to your review on Phantoms THEN! But how could it not take me so long, with each time I read it, I was sent into hyperventilating fits of excitement and fan girlish screams? XDAuthor's response
Hahaha. I'm really glad it gave you happy screams. :D And no problem at all. I really do hope you continue it. That would be rad!
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