- THAT WAS FANTISTICO. the last line made it, it was an 'inter texual reference to a previous line or comment' ;D Oh yess, who listens in Enlish lesssonss?;D
Please.. pleasse... please make this chaptered? or at least a sequel?
*Gets down on knees*
oh my godd... i can't believe i'm going to say this...
IF... IF .. IF YOU LOVE FRERARD YOU'LL WRITE MORE
*Gasps* OMFG LYDIA YOU CANT SAY THAT?!
i just did.
(#) XxSearchAndDestroyxX 2012-08-01OHMIGOD. YOURE STORIES ALL DESERVE FOR YOU TI GET YELLED AT IN ALL CAPS! IT WAS AMAZING THE FIRST TIME YOU POSTED THIS, BUT NOW, ITS FUCKING MINDBLOWING. LIKE AN EXPLOSION OF A LARGE FACTORY JUST HAPPENED IN MY HEAD AS I READ THIS. I LITERALLY THINK YOU KILLED ME WITH YOURE SKILLS! I JUST, WOW, AND HAPPY BIRFDAY! KEEP WRITING, YOU ARE FANTASTIC AT IT! I JUST, WOW! I LOVE YOU AND ALL YOUR WORK! =D=D=D=D
Author's responseAhhh, thank you so much! This review made my night, I'm so happy you liked it and...ahh, just thank you so much :'D You've made me smile like a complete lunatic :D
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-08-01Only person that laughs uncontrolably at the word cock? maybe
oh baby, when you talk like that you know you've got me hypnotized so be kind bla bla bla somethign something sounds of my body
Author's responseI do too, which meant writing this involved a lot of awkward, stifled giggling.
(#) AlteredStateOfMind 2012-11-23Gah, absolutely adore this. The descriptions are great and really effective, but not too much at the same time. I love Frank's character, he reminds me of myself a few years ago when I was caught in that 'quick hook up' stage. The smut was hot to say the least. Everything was so intense between Gerard and Frank, it was all just perfect :3 I don't blame Frank for being completely smitten over Gerard, I'd be the same way, haha.
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