(#) MusicAndMiseryLoveMe 2006-07-05Oh, it was cute! I love that you update in fast succession. It makes meh smile. I used all my rating points on you, hah.
Author's responseThat makes me smile and happy at the same time. I have updates about my stories in my profile often, so yeah. The next few may be tear jerking...and sad on Pat's part, but also...touching. oops, said too much. ;] keep up the reading. I'll update right now, just for you.
(#) Lillith_Thursday 2006-10-15Um... yeah Awesome story so far from what I've read but I noticed a slight error. Okay... in one of the earlier chapters, Pete and Amy went out to the park for ice cream. Well, in this chapter you said that Amy is vegan. Vegans don't eat meat or dairy products. Vegetarians on the other hand don't eat meat but they do eat dairy products. Just thought I'd point that out. Sorry if I sound like a bitch or anything. It's a really great story. I'm going to read the rest of the chapters right now.
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