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• Screw Pizza

  (#) detonationmouse 2012-06-05

  eyes bleeding What was this fuckery?? O_o

  Author's response

  You are such a troll, you don't see me commenting on your stories shit like that. You're all attacking me, I haven't went on any of you peoples shit and said any bs, I'm respectful and you call me the troll

• Screw Pizza

  (#) RyanCyanideKiller 2012-06-05

  Sweet Jesus. Where to start... Grammar needs A LOT of improvement. I could barely even read it. Also, pretty sure his name is Billie, not Billy.

  Author's response

  You are such a troll, you don't see me commenting on your stories shit like that. You're all attacking me, I haven't went on any of you peoples shit and said any bs, I'm respectful and you call me the troll
  
  Did you even read this? It has nothing to do with Billie or whoever you're talking about.

• Screw Pizza

  (#) Mikeyunicornrawr 2012-06-05

  Awful Grammar.
  Not enough detail.
  

  Author's response

  You are such a troll, you don't see me commenting on your stories shit like that. You're all attacking me, I haven't went on any of you peoples shit and said any bs, I'm respectful and you call me the troll

• Screw Pizza

  (#) Mikeyunicornrawr 2012-06-05

  And sorry, but what do you expect after something like that?

  Author's response

  Did you even read if?
  
  ^it not if^

• Screw Pizza

  (#) RyanCyanideKiller 2012-06-05

  When exactly did I call you a troll?

  Author's response

  You were thinking it

• Screw Pizza

  (#) Mikeys_Glasses 2012-06-05

  No. Just- no.

  Author's response

  I'm sorry that you hate Frikey

• Screw Pizza

  (#) detonationmouse 2012-06-05

  So calling us cunts and bitches and hoes is respectful? Yeah, real /respectful/. Ya know what? Get.A.Life.

  Author's response

  Never called anyone a cunt, that's crossing a line

• Screw Pizza

  (#) JCproductions 2012-06-06

  I actually thought this was quite good :) It's certainly better than some of the other shit posted on this site, seriously, a LOT of them don't even bother with full stops. It sucks. But this was pretty good :D Like everything, it needs a beta, but otherwise it was fine. I think the other people commenting aren't used to reading this sort of thing, crossovers or whatever, so don't worry about it. If you want a good site to go to that will get you good feedback and not trolls, go to livejournal, if you're not there already. Keep writing! Practice makes perfect!

• Screw Pizza

  (#) JCproductions 2012-06-06

  *Or maybe the other people commenting are involved in something I haven't seen or read before now, so I'm just gonna say that maybe they're angry... Also, I'm not involved or taking sides in anything, just left a review on the story. That's all.

• Screw Pizza

  (#) ThanksChemVenom 2012-06-08

  Grammar needs work, a lot more detail is needed, and it was totally out of place with the "they knew not when" thing, and the characters' dialogue was really bad.
  
  And yep, I read it. Which is why I'm reviewing.

  Author's response

  I never accused you of not reading it. Thanks for the criticism.

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